by Havan Fellows
***Read as part of the free [b:Don't Read in the Closet: Volume Two|12993786|Don't Read in the Closet Volume Two|Blaine D. Arden|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1320203849s/12993786.jpg|18154040] anthology. Story #10***Mostly because I couldn't connect with the characters.... up to the next!
*** 3 stilted stars ***Why did the characters talk in such a stilted way like that? Was it to kind of make up for the debauchery later in the story? Debauchery is still debauchery even wrapped up in polite and proper dialogue. I love debauchery, but it needs to be earnest. This felt almost as the au...
I couldn't quite get into the sub and dom's mind and wasn't able to connect with them. All in all rather disappointing, D+.
Log in with Facebook 
