by Kady Stewart
I couldn't get through the Present Tense and a messy writing. DNF-ing at 25%. Tagging and rating that part only. Jace is total cliche, a poor 18 year old, who takes care of his little sister in lieu of his parents. He is also being abused by his i-dont-give-a-fuck, barely there mother and bullied by...
...and they lived happily ever after in Stockholm. The end.
Eh. Pretty standard slave-fic fare, I suppose. Here's some stuff I typed while reading:Wow. That mom, man. I hope Macey's okay without Jace D:And eh. I like the name Jace. I don't so much like the name Jay. Similarly with Gabe vs Gavin. Gavin is like a potato sound. (ETA: Don't ask me what that mean...
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