His Voice, His Command (Naughty Nooners)
by:
Vonna Harper (author)
Format: ebook
ASIN: 7233337
Publisher: Ellora's Cave
Pages no: 28
Category:
Adult Fiction,
Romance,
Erotica,
Erotic Romance,
Adult,
Contemporary Romance,
Contemporary,
Sexuality,
Short Stories,
Bdsm,
Fiction
This is a very short, erotic read. I wasn't impressed with either the writing voice or the story. The master/slave element seemed contrived and the basic premise rather silly. I was hoping for something different at the end, but wasn't surprised with how it ended.I'm giving it 2 stars because I was ...
I didn't realize until I saw all the other reviews that the ending of this story was supposed to be a surprise. It seemed fairly obvious from the get-go to me, which is perhaps why I didn't find the story upsetting. Mainly though, it felt really inauthentic to me. I didn't believe in either the "mas...
The first part of the book seems like it is missing.
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