Innocence to the Max (Don't Read in the Closet)
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SJD Peterson
Format: free online fiction
ASIN: 12009044
Category:
Fantasy,
Paranormal,
Romance,
Erotica,
Paranormal Romance,
Contemporary,
Short Stories,
Glbt,
M M Romance,
Bdsm,
Vampires
This story left me with a huge question mark in my head. How did both know each names and that Max was a vampire? How did they find each other? What remains with me is a huge 'Why'.
Wasn't bad. I liked it for a while, but then it got trite... (and melodramatic *shudders)
Nice vampire tale meeting his mate. The story ends with uniting of the two main characters. It feels like the end of the story is just the beginning. Maybe a novel in the making?
This was an enjoyable story, but I kept thinking there were parts missing. The ending seemed a little rushed, and that is the point where I really wanted to read more. This might have better as a full-length story with more detail of their time after they finally got together.
I found this story to be an intriguing start. I liked a couple of the sex scenes Cisco spied upon when he entered the BDSM club. *wink wink* I wish there was more to this story. Cisco is cute as a young innocent boy. Oh the things I'd like to do to him. To hear him whimper, beg and scream woul...