I'm going to grade this based solely on the story and not on all the grammar errors (yes, it was annoying the first few times I had to restructure a sentence in my head but after a while my brain just automatically did it for me). The world and character development was very well done and the author...
Which is a shame since the story really does sound good. However, if the grammar really is as bad as some of the other reviewers say, I may just shoot myself before getting to any of the "good stuff"...
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