Wow, this is a very short story but it just moved to the top of my favorite J.L. Merrow stories, which is saying a lot. Writing in first person can be tricky, and I rate this story a good 5.5 stars for the first person voice alone. The narrator, Vinnie, is a Manhattanite who is none too cultured o...
Although a short story, but this one is a definite winner. The formula comes from the narrator (it's in 1st person), Vinnie, a security worker. His thoughts and words are hilarious and entertaining That's Paulie. We work out together most days. Tried screwing around some, but it didn't work out. He'...
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