A good story with a great message. The delivery can be confusing since reader's are reading from David's POV, so readers are getting the present setting(what's happening his life at that moment) and a trip down memory lane/flashbacks (what happened through his life to lead him to where he is now). ...
Well, more like 1.5* It didn't work for me at all. The story itself was nice enough, after finally getting the snippets into the correct timeline. But these flashbacks were rather annoying, as they prevented the flow of the story. Additionally in my opinion the title didn't really fit.
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