Adam was a lot more intuitive than I though he was going to be with the whole soul thing. The ending was a bit of a surprise and I wished there was more. John really piqued my interest and maybe one day there'll be a story for John?
I saw the end twist coming so the whole thing was moot. Adam was a bit of a flake and I felt sorry for John 'coz he has some issues to sort out. *shrugs* Didn't really work for me.
Very short story avail on kindle. I couldnt find it elsewhere. Loved it, would make a great novel.
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