by Ari McKay
This was a cute, very sweet, short story.
Cute story that had a lot of elements I love in it. It had a great and charming dog, Fergus. A sexy Kilt wearing Scot Lyall and a cute shy baker Martin.( ha, and my shelf with the appropriate name cupcake in it has never been more fitting) They have looked and lusted from afar at the Highland games ...
3 stars for the story and a star for the Highland games setting. A fun, quick read.
This story had so much promise - an interesting location, a unique sport, very individual characters and a cute dog - but somehow just didn't do it for me as much as I thought it would.Lyall is big and strong and wonderfully protective of the smaller and more serious Martin. Martin is shy but Lyall ...
2.5 StarsThis is a first for me. Here I am sitting down getting ready to write up my review for this short story and I keep thinking, what exactly can I say that hasn't already been said in the blurb? The blurb is so detailed that you actually don't need me to repeat it. Plus, it's better detailed t...
Two adorable guys make this read sweet and funny with a sidekick that steals the show.Martin's at the games for business, promoting his bakery, Flour Power. Enjoying the lively atmosphere and the view--all those gorgeous tartan-obscured legs on parade when he makes a new friend, Fergus. Now, Fergus ...
Chemistry fizzle between the MCs. I didn't feel any electricity. The dog was the best part of the story.
This is another one of those stories that I really enjoyed. The characters are interesting and I would love to see this expanded beyond the Highland Games...so much potential for a phenomenal novella.
2.5 HeartsReview written for MM Good Book Reviewshttp://mmgoodbookreviews.wordpress.com/It’s the yearly Coastal Carolina’s Highland Games and Martin like he does every year rents his booth and starts creating his pastries. Like always he wants to make people fall in love with his work and gain a hig...
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