by J.P. Barnaby
*** 4.5 Stars ***
Would have loved for it to be longer. I felt like I was reading the beginning of a book or a prequel. It is about the beginning of tbeir relationship, so now I want to read more about them and how their relationship grows.
Sweet story about Josh finding his perfect master. I would have rated this higher but it was way too short and ended too abruptly. I wanted another 20 pages.
Naughty Brief Review to come.
I have to agree with the other reviewers, this story felt incomplete. Really enjoyable right up until the end, but your just getting a feel for the characters when it ends. Would of loved to read this as a longer novel.
Felt like an unfinished novel.The story was too short,to fully developcomplex characters like Josh and Wade and the dynamics of a 24/7 D/s relationship.All in all it was a nice read and a somehow odd mix of beeing slightly uncomfortable and very sweet.
This story left me unsatisfied. I felt the story was just beginning when it ended and I was just getting a grasp on the characters. I was really intrigued by the couple and for that reason 2.75 Stars is my rating. Just wish that it wasn't so short.
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