Meant To Be (Heaven Hill, #1)
Pages no: 201
, Adult Fiction
, Contemporary Romance
, Romantic Suspense
3.5 - 4 starsDenise is a single mum of 13 year old twins and is struggling to keep up. Taking an extra shift at work, ends up changing her world in a way she could have never imagined. Liam, the VC of the local MC club, is Denise's best friends brother and someone she has only known from a distance...
I struggled with this and I am so sad that I did. Why did I struggle, I found it too tame!Yeah it had the vernacular of a bad boy motorbikers book, but it had no steam and sexiness, all hot scenes where brushed over and left to our imagination which ok is cool but I want to read it too damn it! Es...
Continuing my streak of books with potential, but REALLY need a good content editor or better beta-readers first.
2 1/2 stars Good conflict and premise. Characters held potential and still leave room for the series to come up. Wasted opportunities due to poor execution of plot sequence and exposition. Investment in more development of characters and backstory, plus good beta readers would help.
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