Newsflash! Being submissive does not mean being weak or a loser. I read others' gripes about Ian, personally had no issues with his character. I would not have been so generous with his family when they reappeared later in the story, but there are many people better than I. His interactions with Gra...
Rather interesting. The way Mya handled the cast of characters was actually rather good. The way they all worked with and around each other seemed nicely seamless.Some grammatical/spelling errors, but still readable.It didn't exactly wow me, but it was still quite good.
FOURS STARS-- I will be honest I didn't like Ian at first. He was a jerk. But after he got sorted by the wonderful pairing of Douglas and Gray and the unique (to me anyway) golem Khalid truly straightened Ian the hell out (with his four arms, yes I said Khalid has four arms). Plus, Khalid taught Ia...
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