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by Kade Boehme
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Tagediebin
Tagediebin rated it 11 years ago
I don't want to crash the party. So let's just say, this one wasn't for me.
Elci - reading is so her thing.
Elci - reading is so her thing. rated it 12 years ago
Some stories don't have a typical HEA, but are still crazy romantic.
julio-alexi genao
julio-alexi genao rated it 12 years ago
Devastating, and beautiful.Savage Alchemya poem for Kade BoehmeMeld grief and joyMake mettle, and fire againAgain. This painIn crucible refinedBut limns beautyFor ever. ©2013 JAGOn The Dock is a heartbreaking short story. Flawed—but unequivocally recommended.Seriously. Read it.
Affairs of M/Men
Affairs of M/Men rated it 12 years ago
Sweet if a bit predictable. I would have given this a higher rating but it's inconsistently written. Some parts are really beautiful but other parts it's not quite so good, like "It’s gonna be in my head til I see your smiling face smiling..." There were some inconsistencies that were important. For...
Affairs of M/Men
Affairs of M/Men rated it 12 years ago
Sweet if a bit predictable. I would have given this a higher rating but it's inconsistently written. Some parts are really beautiful but other parts it's not quite so good, like "It’s gonna be in my head til I see your smiling face smiling..." There were some inconsistencies that were important. For...
Debra E's Never-Ending TBR
Debra E's Never-Ending TBR rated it 12 years ago
So sad but so sweet. Loved it.
Anke1028
Anke1028 rated it 12 years ago
For me there was too much crammed into too few pages of story.
Sandra
Sandra rated it 12 years ago
Ohmygod, why why why did I chose this to read when I wanted a short, light story?! I just finished a tear-jerker and didn't mean to read another one immediately, but it's just so sweet and sad and beautiful I can't bring myself to care. How an author can accomplish the things she did in 17 pages I ...
Unapologetic Reader, Psychotic Writer
In two words the story felt short and hurried. It was a beautiful story crafted with immense love - one could feel the author's heart behind it. But the story felt rushed like one was shoveling the food into the mouth rather than chewing it slowly to savor the taste. It still was delicious though. ...
AimeeKim
AimeeKim rated it 12 years ago
3.5 stars rounded up~From the get-go, I fell in love with the narrator's voice.Some small niggles with the time-jumps and some unnecessary details such as the soldier's mother, but a lovely ending packed with emotions..Cried, even though I could tell where the story was going.Just take a few minutes...
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