Um, quite an interesting story, although it was too short. Surely it could be larger with more details, in-between and at the end, too.
This is a good little paranormal short, although it's not immediately apparent that it's paranormal. I skimmed through the set-up but it needed to be there to explain the later events. To be honest it could have ended 2 pages earlier with a mysterious HFN ending and that would have been great, we ...
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