2/13 - I'm currently on page 216 and it doesn't seem to be "getting better" yet. It's not the verbosity that's bothering me, it's the utter lack of characterization, combined with the lack of visuals. I feel like I can neither 'see' nor 'know' any of these characters. They're simply ciphers moving a...
For re-read project.It's badass overall. Has its weak moments such as the sustained uncritical use of the term soul as well as some rhetorical defaults, such as redundancy, over-explanation, and other items that are somewhat insulting to the audience. Those moments do not cancel the edifice of thi...
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