August 9, 2013:FREE on Smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/167905/#downloadPart 2 is free also: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/229956Side story free: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/268842I love Smashwords
I was about to say "wadda fuck did I just read?"But then I realized this is supposed to be erotica.Well...that explains a lot.Still, it was kind of deep in a non-conventional, unsettling sort of way...I think I kind of liked it.
Enjoyed this short story, but I definitely think that with a more developed story and less abrupt transitions it could be stronger and more engaging. Liked the concept and boy, Loki and Dasan are tasty kinksters.
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