I thought this short story was ok. Nothing quite to "write home about". In my opinion, it was actually kind of superficially written with an ubrupt ending. I have read much better short stories.
There is a lot of humour along with violence and vengeance in this short story. There’s also a nice twist at the end. Dani Amore has a twisted imagination, you may not want her as a babysitter, but as a writer of Noir she’s spot on.
What goes around comes around, or in this case, revenge is best served.... *no spoiler here*