by Charlotte Mistry
I expected some clumsily written, typo-ridden PWP. What I got was a very well written, very erotic scene. It even had characters and atmosphere. It is not a novel, not even a novella. More a prologue. It was free and read more like a sample (hence one star deduction, as this is false labelling...
Sold Into Service: Boys With Painted Lips is 1st part of 5 part long serial. Well written and if you're fan of darker erotica, I can highly recommend this as first part is free on kindle.
I was bowled over by the quality of the writing. The vast majority of erotica shorts are barely readable, with authors either already fighting with SPaG and plot from the start, or retelling some porn video they've looked at, or being needlessly vulgar and unerotic. At best you get something clear...
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