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review 2017-03-06 19:13
The Ghost of Robert Brown: A Mystery Novel - P. Wish

There is so much wrong with this book that I hardly know where to start.....It is full of inconsistencies,not to say mistakes(a grand chandelier,sparkling like diamonds,all that from the glow of 1 bulb,marvelous....;green eyes that mysteriously change into blue eyes and fifty pages further ,lo behold,they are chocolate brown;characters who seem to forget what they said,or asked,4 sentences earlier and so many more unbelievable errors (and I mean many more!))

As for the writing,their is virtually no description of any surrounding(the school is supposed to be gothic,well your guess is as good as mine...),the dialogues are static,there are strange time-lapses and none of the characters feel real(and are definitely not well defined),certain sentences are not finished and there are a load of silly mistakes(for example:it would help easy my conscience...)

The worst read this year...it is a pity,because there is a good storyline hidden somewhere but unfortunately.....

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text 2017-03-06 15:47
Reading progress update: I've read 200 out of 225 pages.
The Ghost of Robert Brown: A Mystery Novel - P. Wish

It's not getting any better!!

"I think he might know something about Robert's death"

Gary raised an eyebrow.

"I have reason to believe he might know something about Robert's death"

Gary's eyes enlarged (!)" You think he might know something?"

That's how a conversation between 2 idiots looks like......

 

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text 2017-03-06 11:59
Reading progress update: I've read 142 out of 225 pages.
The Ghost of Robert Brown: A Mystery Novel - P. Wish

I don't believe this......one of the characters had green eyes to start with,then they turned inexplicable into sparkling blue ones and now they are chocolate brown.....

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text 2017-03-05 14:30
Reading progress update: I've read 10 out of 225 pages.
The Ghost of Robert Brown: A Mystery Novel - P. Wish

Not a brilliant start......"Her nose was long,but the wrinkles gave away her age."

I'm sure that somewhere on this planet,this interesting sentence makes sense but unfortunately it does not make any sense to me...

 

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text 2016-04-04 19:33
The Doppelgänger is Free on Amazon Kindle Store
The Doppelgänger - P. Wish

My novel, The Doppelganger: A Psychological Thriller is available for free on Amazon Kindle Store until tomorrow. 

Hurry and download a copy here: http://buff.ly/22VreuG

Don't forget to leave a review when you're done.

Thank you! 

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