by Ricardo Fleshman
I got a copy of this in electronic format from the Author, and sadly, I just can't read it.The formatting and errors in the text are too distracting that I can't enjoy the story.I got to 10%. Hence the lack of a rating.Here's what I noticed:2% - ...a cinderblock wal(l).4% - ...hobbled into the al(l)...
understandably it is a fast paced world but even the wind is blurry and formless when it is in its optimum speed even though its power is felt all along. Pace can uproot the core sometimes. First of all a huge thanks to the author and his team for providing me with the copy of his workThe Dying Danc...
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