The First Alpha
Publisher: Bangkok Nights
Pages no: 140
, Adult Fiction
, Paranormal Romance
, Short Stories
Urgh I kept at it but at 60% I pulled the plug when I came across this horror:Cassie chewed her lower lip and clutched handfuls of hay between her fingers as Adam slid slowly forward, spreading her tightness with his enormous member. She gasped with surprise as her dripping wet lips spread smoothly ...
Free read but not one will be revisiting as all the characters felt like they were going through the motions and did not particularly care about any of them except Cassies' dad who should have gotten a better deal before his finally selfless act of love.
Well, the blurb sounded quirky and the price was right, but I had a hard time finishing it.I just felt disconnected from the story despite the fact that it seemed well written and had very few editing errors.There was a lot going on for such a short read. I felt the focus should have been on the in...