There are certain expressions that were so frequently used, they really got on my nerves. E.g. "healthy maleness" and "seductively" (obviously they smile, talk and do all other things seductively...that is "telling, not showing" in its purest form.). There was no real plot. The sappy-ness factor o...
Again, good story, funny characters, but it could have been combined with the first book, some scenes cut, and been one book.