Cute but I would have liked to see more interaction with Luke rather than Ben. And the sister frigging annoyed me so much! I wanted to smack her by the end.
There's nothing likable about Derek. He's got no morals, no principles, no integrity, doesn't try to understand the man he supposedly loves and doesn't begin to even try to become someone better until maybe the last 15 pages of the story. Even if he didn't start off this way (in his far distant past...