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by Jessa Ryan
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KizunaYueMichaelis
KizunaYueMichaelis rated it 9 years ago
Well paced, and more a gay-guy-college-life than a manties romance, so beware. In that aspect it was very disappointing because, while there are lace and man panties and stockings, it all happens when Mark is alone in his room, without no one to appreciate it (and no, I don't mention his bestie Sam ...
B3 - Brooklyn's Book Bites
B3 - Brooklyn's Book Bites rated it 10 years ago
Excellent short story!The secondary characters were awesome. Sam is such a great friend. Poor Taylor.
DreZ Book Addict
DreZ Book Addict rated it 10 years ago
Cute story, but I wish there was more. And what's up with Sam? Will he get a story too?
vivianblair
vivianblair rated it 10 years ago
This was a complete, sweet little parcel of a story with a pretty bow on top. It's not very long, but Mark and Landon's journey, from discovering each other to interacting tentatively and finally getting together, was satisfying. I found them both likeable, and Landon's reactions to Mark was especia...
Reader's Discretion Advised
Reader's Discretion Advised rated it 10 years ago
This was bizarre in that the prompt was there, and it was a big-ish part of the story, but it didn't dominate and often seemed to take (*goddamn it what's the idiom* second wheel? no, that doesn't make sense goddamn it) it's like there in the back of your mind but more of an "oh, yeah, and then this...
Trisha Harrington's Blog
Trisha Harrington's Blog rated it 11 years ago
This was so sweet and cute. I really liked Mark and Landon. They definitely made an awesome couple, and I liked the build up to it. Plus the whole uncle thing was really nice, if not predictable.I'd love to read Sam's story. I get the feeling there's something there. Well, a girl can hope anyway.
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