POV changes made it very hard for me to follow what was going on, and I lost track of who was who in the shuffle more than once. I think I would have found it sexier if I had a better understanding of who the characters were, and their friendship before the events in this story. It felt like the all...
This was well written, but bondage isn't my cup of tea.
This is a free short story from Love is Always Write - Volume 1.Nice story about 2 sports coaches and their first time together. Had the potential to be a good full length story as I would have been keen to find out what happened next.
1.5 stars I didn't like this much. Definitely PWP and so scrambled with lots of superfluous characters. Let's see...Greg, Jeff, Quinn, Pancho, Curt, Raiden. A lacrosse coach and a soccer coach. And POV hopping. Cocks doing a 'happy dance' (what is that?). And a guy falls asleep on a dining chair...
Hot little short. Would have liked a little more back story about the guys but this was good for LIAW event.
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