by Melissa Craig
This was a short read and not a bad one for an author's first story. I think it could use some work though to increase my enjoyment and answer some questions I had. There were a few places in which the sentence structure threw me out of the flow; misplaced commas, periods, etc.I also am left wonderi...
This short story needs a lot of editing and proof-reading. The messy punctuation kept me distracted most of the time. The story is quite hollow too. Indeed the story is too simple, so it doesn't interest me so much. I need plots that can hook me. I am not even curious about what will go on afterward...
Whisper Sweet Nothings is author Melissa Craig's take on on two characters from Stuart Bannerman's screenplay "Run"Penny has lived an overprotected life but Luke makes her want to let loose. One phone call and an unexpected visit, leaves us all wondering if Penny's lust is finally going to be quench...
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