Just to short for me to emotionally connect.
This was a really nice little short. The writing was nice and I loved the couple. I'd love to read a follow up or something for these guys at some point.
This one did absolutely nothing for me.
Short and hot. Reminds me a bit of Free Falling by SE Jakes. This could be a touch more developed even for the few pages. Outside of a detailed description of Spider's peen, I have no idea what either of them looks like. Sort of large cast for length, but it serves the purpose.Bite-sized smut win.
“Fuck. You are so fucking tight. You’re just sucking my cock in, squeezing the fuck out of it. Fuck!” Did that catch your attention? No?How about that awesome prompt? Go on. I'll wait while you read the blurb.Still waffling?How about the prompt pic?Oh...now you're interested?Okay. This author takes ...