Christmas With My Grinch
by:
B.L. Morticia (author)
Bahambug! Nathan Ellerby hates Christmas! His lover, retired Lt. Bryant Duncan is ready to celebrate. He wants his life partner to enjoy the holiday too but Nathan has other ideas of how he’d like to spend their well deserved time off.
Bahambug! Nathan Ellerby hates Christmas! His lover, retired Lt. Bryant Duncan is ready to celebrate. He wants his life partner to enjoy the holiday too but Nathan has other ideas of how he’d like to spend their well deserved time off.
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Format: ebook
ISBN:
9781301064779
Publish date: December 3rd 2012
Publisher: Triad Literary
Pages no: 15
Edition language: English
Holy shit this sucked, and not just the plot the writing was horrible. It was stilted, jarring, and very juvenile. I ended up skimming to the end, not that I cared what happened, I just have been getting a lot of grief for reviewing unfinished books. Well I never should have bothered, nothing happen...
Bridging the divide between the zealous and the apathetic takes compromise. That's exactly what Bryant concludes when trying to turn his grinch, Nathan into a Holiday elf. Stilted dialogue that was difficult to assign and thus seemed liable to be either MC took away from this short.
This short is pretty funny but not in the way the author intended I think. These chatty guys have the cheesiest dialogue. The main point of the story is to show just how much Bryant loves Christmas and Nathan hates it. Ok, fine, but pretty flat storytelling really and the only connection between the...
Rounding up for being free! This is a free short about an established couple, Bryant and Nathan.I'm not sure if there has been a story about them before and this is just a freebie to catch up with them or not.But it's pretty much Bryant wanting to go all out for Christmas and his lover not wanting i...
1.5 starsLooks like I have to be the grinch here, but this story was totally wishy-washy. Nothing substantial whatsoever. The use of 'Lieutenant' was annoying, on the other hand the dialogue was more fitting for 15 year old girls. From around 60% I was skimming, which with regard to the shortness of...
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