Color Me
Format: free online fiction
Edition language: English
Series: Hot Summer Days
How is this a paranormal? Scott sees spots, but they never play any kind of a role in this story. OK, Scott sees a red spot near Jonah's injured ankle. He sees spots when people get emotional. But not always. Sometimes he sees nothing, no matter how emotional people are. WTF is with those spots? O.o...
***Read as part of the free [b:Don't Read in the Closet: Volume Two|12993786|Don't Read in the Closet Volume Two|Blaine D. Arden|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1320203849s/12993786.jpg|18154040] anthology. Story #1***Oh my Gosh! My head is spinning!This was so confusing! There were so many people. A...
*** 2,5 plot hole stars ***The bad:The story in itself wasn't particularly good. It had a whole lot of plot points, loose ends and characters, which were crammed in to this not-so-short story. The story suffers from a "compression syndrome" (yeah, I made that up)... trying to compress a whole book i...