Edition language: English
One flashback for back-story is fine but this sucker popped back and forth repeatedly and was nothing but frustrating. What made me so angry was I really liked the MC's and their kink was different and I wanted to understand it and them more. I'd take this to an editor and rework it. Stowe had a fiv...
Ridiculously elaborate writing, like that episode of M*A*S*H where Radar learns to write by mail. Story was okay, but I felt really detached from the characters.