I liked the premise. I was a bit disappointed in the writing, but it wasn't horrible. I was, however, very disappointed in the (lack of) ending. Seriously, there's no reason to force a trilogy of novellas with cliffhangers when you can have a decent longer length novel.
One of the main issues I had with Sundered is the length. Whilst some novels can get away with packing a lot into so few pages, in Sundered it simply hampered how much attachment I could form to the characters. I liked Mara - she isn't an awesome bad-arse heroine, she's just an average, slightly ove...
I thought the plot was great, but the writing was very sparse. I never felt like I was inhabiting the world, or felt like I cared what happened to the characters all that much.
Kindle free download 3/14/12
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