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I loved the language. The choice of words. The compelling rhythm.I had to re-read the “beginning” (well, the first 30%) several times because I got lost. I didn’t understand who was who at first.What I didn’t like that much was the impersonal touching. Not by the master, but by the one who is watchi...
Thanks to the author for the effort and participating in this event and offering this freebie.Beautiful and intense story with wonderful writing that leaves you wanting more, the author has truly captured the prompt and the photo in a very erotic and enjoyable way, great job and well done!
short—but look closer.it's packed, really. loads of carefully selected detail and offhand narrative comments that aren't at all accidental.intense, calculated, and thoughtful.as a vignette it is an elegant bit of writing—even with the odd comma splice—and it thoroughly rewards closer inspection.the ...
Excerpt:Two long, gaping slashes down Forrester's buttocks, one to each side, deliberate and deep enough, were the source of most of the blood soaked into the jeans. [read the rest of the excerpt here]My buttocks is now suffering from phantom pain (>.
oh dear.