I loved the language. The choice of words. The compelling rhythm.I had to re-read the “beginning” (well, the first 30%) several times because I got lost. I didn’t understand who was who at first.What I didn’t like that much was the impersonal touching. Not by the master, but by the one who is watchi...
Thanks to the author for the effort and participating in this event and offering this freebie.Beautiful and intense story with wonderful writing that leaves you wanting more, the author has truly captured the prompt and the photo in a very erotic and enjoyable way, great job and well done!
short—but look closer.it's packed, really. loads of carefully selected detail and offhand narrative comments that aren't at all accidental.intense, calculated, and thoughtful.as a vignette it is an elegant bit of writing—even with the odd comma splice—and it thoroughly rewards closer inspection.the ...
Excerpt:Two long, gaping slashes down Forrester's buttocks, one to each side, deliberate and deep enough, were the source of most of the blood soaked into the jeans. [read the rest of the excerpt here]My buttocks is now suffering from phantom pain (>.
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Adrian is telling his lover about incident that happened in his school years. Well written short story.
For me this story was all that much more powerful for how short it was. I felt I learned almost as much about the person telling about the event that took place, as I did the boy it happened to. The writing style drew me in quickly, and made me feel for the boy. I liked how it recognized the role th...
This was a brutal, vivid glimpse into another world, that of the fabled British boarding school. Although the setting is contemporary, the scene and the values and attitudes that led to it could equally have emanated from Tom Brown's Schooldays. I can well believe however that little has changed, ba...
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I guess I'll be exception to the rule. ;) I thought this was beautifully written! The way it was sectioned absolutely illustrated the distance the character required in order to reveal his story. The only drawback is its brevity! To get full marks (or Stars) I'd need the full story!
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