Wow a moment in a book the author can "show just how evil the bad guy is" and... doesn't take it. Really refreshing to see. We get to see how evil the big bad is in other, better ways.
Also David is still turning out to be OK. Our hero is also being smart. Though she has got that whole "I just can't kill anything" going on. It wasn't produced as inanely as I've seen it before and she does hit the guy.
I'm really getting into this book. Probably because David, the main male, isn't an ALPHA MALE like all the other books have the guy be. I'm not certain if he's sincere in his like of Laurel, as he might do a face-heel turn, but so far he's a pretty great character.
"I won't go to my parents, but this dude I met I can totally trust!"
While parents can be shit, I would not trust a man to keep a secret.
THey are the one's that blabber the most.
The beginning seems rushed in regard to David, however that probably to get ot the action. I've felt that way when I've been writing.
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