Up at the Cottage
Format: ebook
ISBN:
9781613720400 (1613720408)
Publish date: June 1st 2011
Publisher: Dreamspinner Press LLC
Pages no: 76
Edition language: English
Series: 2011 Daily Dose
It was a nice read, but somehow the end is missing. I was waiting for the parents to arrive.
I like the story an the writing, however I think it would have gone over better had the characters been older. As I pictured the characters while reading I gave them both an extra 10 years each. The dialogue seemed to 'old' for 18-19 year olds.
The prose, the dialog and the character development was stilted and uninteresting. I felt as if I were reading a laundry list of activities and details instead of a flowing story. I hardly ever have trouble finishing a book, especially one under 100 pages but I couldn't finish this one. I kept think...