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review 2014-07-15 14:25
A Corner of White – Jaclyn Moriarty
A Corner of White (The Colours of Madeleine #1) - Jaclyn Moriarty

I read this back in March, right before my life fell apart, and fortunately wrote most of the below at the time. I'm finally playing catch-up now, so:

 

I swore I wouldn't request any more books from Netgalley for a while, and I had a lot in queue in front of this book – but I couldn't help it. Having finished something wonderful (a Dorothy L. Sayers), I sifted through all the books that have been sitting neglected on the Kindle, and opened something new from Netgalley instead.

 

I don't know how much sense this will make, but for some reason A Corner of White felt like a book written in the present tense. It's not; there's nothing so gimmicky about the writing: alternating third person points of view, switching back and forth between Madeleine here in the World (in Cambridge, England) and Elliott in Cello, a different world altogether. Maybe it was the immediacy of the writing that felt like present-tense, or the first lines, chatty as they are: "Madeleine Tully turned fourteen yesterday, but today she did not turn anything.

 

"Oh, wait. She turned a page."

 

It's a swiftly flowing story, about Madeleine finding a note tucked into an out-of-order parking meter (and a good thing too that the London traffic department is in this universe so lax about fixing out-of-order meters), and replying, and of her reply being found on the other side of a crack between worlds by Elliott Baranski, in the back of a broken tv which has been incorporated into a sculpture. It makes sense, trust me. It's all about perception – Madeleine's perception of Elliott, and vice versa, and also how both of them see their own worlds and their own lives. Both their fathers are missing from their lives, and the reasons for that which everyone around them keeps assuring them are true may not be correct.

 

One of the only things keeping me from a five-star rating for A Corner of White is a huge gaffe that I can only hope was/will be caught in a final edit before publication. The small stuff – botched punctuation and formatting and such – is, as has often been said, par for the course, and this was after all an "uncorrected proof", so lamentable as it is it doesn't count toward the rating. But the mention – a couple of times – of the "original" colors consisting of red, blue, and green … That was not good. Primary and secondary and complementary colors are something I learned about in my first months of art school. That is, I'm sure I knew the basics before that, but it was well and truly drilled into our heads early on, being, I think it's obvious, rather important. Since green is made of blue and yellow …

 

A useful trick to remembering complementary colors was to think of them as holidays – red and green, Christmas; blue and orange, Halloween (blue standing in for black to make it work), and (vitally, for Elliott) yellow and purple, Easter. Just putting that out there.

 

Apart from that, it was wonderfully enjoyable. And they'll fix that, right? Right?

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review SPOILER ALERT! 2013-10-31 18:15
A Corner of White
A Corner of White - Jaclyn Moriarty
***Note: this review assumes that you've read the book.***
 
One-sentence summary: A charming parallel-world fantasy that by itself is not much of a story, but lays a fun foundation for the sequel.
 
What's great. I really enjoyed the language in this book, the oddness, and the playful narration. The Colors are an interesting new fantasy device, and I'm looking forward to seeing what Moriarty does with them (my hunch is that they're misunderstood as a malevolent force, but who knows). The Kingdom of Cello, dumb name and all, is delightful, in a fairy tale way. 
 
First-Book Syndrome. I thought the pacing was off. It suffers in the way THE RAVEN BOYS did--but even more so--where this first volume is setting the groundwork for the series, and there's a slow, world-building start. This poses no problem a few years from now, when readers will be able to gobble up all the books in a row, and the overall pacing across books will feel appropriate. But for now, when it's essentially a standalone, we really needed to get to the letters between Madeleine and Elliot sooner, and to the issue of people being abducted to the other side. The real action of the book happens all at the end, with a sudden revelation that's a bit deus ex machina. (The seamstress, Clover, has been friends with Princess Coe all these years, and has also been watching Elliot's note-exchanging from her front porch. Couldn't the groundwork for that have been laid earlier? Clover takes it upon herself to tell Coe that Elliot had a friend in The World--just "guessing" that Coe will need Elliot's World contact more than she'll want to enforce the law.) There was a sort of unraveling of the plot from the mouths of characters toward the end of the book, a bit like an Agatha Christie mystery, when Miss Marple or Hercule Poirot explains the whole thing. We learn from conversations rather than from action that Mishka and Olivia were hostiles, Mishka abducted Abel Baranski into The World, the Twicklehams had abducted Derrin to be their fake daughter, Madeleine's dad was a drunk, the entire royal family has been abducted, Coe is really bright and Jupiter is really the stable boy, etc. Everything is explained, but after so many pages of slightly pointless Cambridge stuff in the beginning of the novel, I wish these plot points had unfolded slowly. This book planted some seeds that promise to come to fruition in the second volume, but none of them grew here past tiny seedlings.   
 
Lack of Character Depth. The fairy tale aspect, while immensely charming, is something of a double-edged sword in that it keeps us at a distance from the characters. Though Madeleine was smart, she felt dreamy and a bit lost in The World. Perhaps this "other-worldness" of her character will come to play in later books (her background is mysteriously veiled), but I never felt her depth. This, even though she has a nice fascination with colors and Isaac Newton, and even though her mother's serious illness should lend richness to her personality. Also, her relationship with Jack felt cold to me (and Belle's convenient case of mono just so that Jack and Madeleine could get together felt forced). Why was that romance in the novel? Somehow Jack and Belle felt more real to me than Madeleine, even though they had less air time--and in general they were all a bit cutsie in the way that JK Rowling sometimes fashions characters (quirky and highly entertaining but with little depth). Elliot was cool, (maybe too cool in that hot-YA-guy way), but I loved his relationship with his mother and devotion to his dad and was glad that he found Madeleine to be a bit insufferable and didn't fall for her via their long distance correspondence (yet). Thank goodness we don't have a clumsy Bridget-Jones girl winning the greatest guy in two parallel dimensions. At least so far.
 
Characters grow when they solve their own problems. Speaking of Elliot, and disappointment in the lack of a real story arc, and how to make characters grow and change: Elliot spends the early part of the book wanting to search for his dad but being thwarted, he spends the middle part coming to terms with the real possibility that his dad simply ran off with a pretty young woman whom he'd become intimate with, and then LUCKY HIM it turns out his dad really was a good guy taken against his will. Similarly, Madeleine is annoyed by her mother's odd behavior, becomes alarmed by it, fails to get her to a doctor, and then her mother proves to be truly very ill. Madeleine only has to struggle with this genuinely catastrophic situation for a couple of days before LUCKY HER the Butterfly Child makes some healing beads and ALL BETTER. Neither of these threads provides a real story arc for the character. They feel pointless for us in a literary sense, given the way they resolve themselves: that is, the characters have their personal devastation lifted from them through no effort of their own. (Elliot will still have to find his dad, but he himself says that the fact that his dad is missing or dead is in some ways easier to live with than his being a scoundrel.) 
 
Not a bleak dystopia. It's appropriate that this book is getting attention, though. I don't think it's of award-winning caliber as a standalone, but it's a rare addition to a slim genre: a wholesome, fun fantasy without paranormal creatures or heavy, miserable dystopia; a book that includes Isaac Newton, a little science, and kids who study auras and astrology for fun. It can be particularly hard for teen readers to find lighthearted fantasy novels like this. 
 
In sum, this is a sweet, different kind of book, and I like that a lot. 
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review 2013-08-27 00:00
A Corner of White (The Colors of Madeline, #1) - Jaclyn Moriarty I had a bit of trouble at first, because Elliot in the Kingdom of Cello seems so much more realistic, more probably than Madeline in Cambridge. The differing story lines and perspectives weren't a problem, just how much more concrete Elliot's life was than hers.And then there are complications, and things start getting more real for Madeline and more fantastic for Elliot, and then it really got gripping. Lots of assumptions turning back on themselves multiple times: I love that.I'm really looking forward to however many others there are in the series, now that the two worlds are properly established. As I recall, I enjoyed each of the Ashbury series a great deal [b:Feeling Sorry for Celia|82783|Feeling Sorry for Celia (Ashbury/Brookfield, #1)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1312026150s/82783.jpg|1013926], [b:The Year of Secret Assignments|82780|The Year of Secret Assignments (Ashbury/Brookfield, #2)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1346939645s/82780.jpg|2161186], [b:The Murder Of Bindy Mackenzie|82781|The Murder Of Bindy Mackenzie (Ashbury/Brookfield, #3)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1360058324s/82781.jpg|1006125], [b:The Ghosts of Ashbury High|7097618|The Ghosts of Ashbury High (Ashbury/Brookfield, #4)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1275882125s/7097618.jpg|7355014]. I'm a sucker for epistles.Library copy.
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review 2013-06-27 00:00
A Corner of White - Jaclyn Moriarty hallie and teresa are killing me :)
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review 2013-06-26 00:00
A Corner of White (The Colours of Madeleine #1)
A Corner of White - Jaclyn Moriarty 2.5In moments of extreme conceit and hubris, sometimes, things click with me and I become them. A pair of dragonfly wings catch my eyes and I decide that's what I'd be if I were a pair of dragonfly wings. Not a vein different, not a vein prettier. That's how [b:A Corner of White|8661987|A Corner of White (The Colours of Madeleine #1)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1341206712s/8661987.jpg|13533441] clicked with me. Other people blinked at regular intervals, but not Belle. Now and then her eyes would go into a flying panic where she’d blink and blink to catch up.CLICK!Unfortunately, I'd be a trying book and it'd take heck of perseverance to be my true readership. The problem with [b:A Corner of White|8661987|A Corner of White (The Colours of Madeleine #1)|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1341206712s/8661987.jpg|13533441] is that its what it says it is. An exploration of worlds and characters; nothing, zilch, nada beyond that. Also Unfortunately, I'm not a very patient person. So while this book clicked with me, and made me feel at home in its pages, the entertainment hydraulics certainly weren't functioning. Page by page, I observed Madeleine, her mother, Elliot; and the levels of my engrossment mitigated, even as I laughed thoughtfully at the epistles being passed between our two protagonists.There's a certain charm to [a:Jaclyn Moriarty|47290|Jaclyn Moriarty|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/authors/1199066598p2/47290.jpg]'s words that had me eager to dress up and parade around as her books. Be it the world of Cambridge or the Kingdom of Cello, she made it magical. Trivial, pesky acts of lives had a flair of surrealism in her books. Snarfing down cakes read akin to being enraptured in fae music. Acts of hooliganism were the works of elves at midnight. A little girl blinking could bring down a rain of fairy dust. It was terrible and fascinating how magic could be brought back in our worlds if only Moriarty were the hand writing our stories. That's how it clicked with me; that's why I have no qualms about being covered in rainbows and shrubs(I wouldn't ordinarily, either).The story and plot exist for the first few chapters, to help us get involved in the book and characters. Later on, plot devices are abandoned in the middle like pigeon carcasses, and storylines are lost and left hanging. After half the book, the languid story(or lack of it) became somnolent albeit it was like waking up from a satiating, beautiful dream. One of those that it hurts to wake up from. They do serve their purpose, though, and get you acquainted with the characters. Quirky, realized and intriguing characters. And not just the protagonists- the side characters had their own share and developments in the book. The wacky adults, the pensive children, and the dreams that burst at the prick of reality...Far be it from me to actually try and give you an account of the happenings and non-happenings of the book, however. I'd just rather explain the rating and my uneasiness at the rating. See, I have a benevolent nature, when it comes to stars and generally, I give it aplenty. Even now, my hand strays and awards the sycophantic half star. The 'thing' being, as I refer to it, the haphazard and slapdash nature of the ending. Throughout the 400 exact pages, we had no story, the threads had been snipped off, and gone for good. But at the end, J. Moriarty seems to have gathered all the cut-offs and joined them end by end stretch it into the next, or so methinks. It's casual and feels like an afterthought. Overall, this book saddened me by being slow and so to cite a friend of mine who is like a JM character herself, My book is not my clone. Your argument is invalid. But guess who's already ordered the whole Ashbury/Brookfield collection after hours and hours of scouring the net and finally getting them for half their original prices. Yeah right, babe! That's me!Crossposted on Books behind Dam{n}s
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