I didn't feel the connection between Jackson and Sylvia for a few reasons. Their relationship re-starts really badly and is missing intimate moments without sex. Jackson comes off as a complete jerk, but he does have some redeeming moments as the story progresses. Sylvia annoyed me a bit the way she runs away from Jackson. I guessed the big reveal fairly early in the story, so it is wasn't surprising at all. Overall the story is well written, and if you like a sexy, brooding alpha male, you will probably enjoy it. There are still more secrets to be revealed and I plan on read the next book in the series, On My Knees, to see how the story develops.