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review 2016-07-20 12:55
Needs lots of work
The Awakening: Book One of the Chronicles of the Nubian Underworld - Shakir Rashaan

*Book source ~ A review copy was provided in exchange for an honest review.

 

Set in the Atlanta area this BDSM story is about Ramesses (AKA Kane) and his wife Neferterri (AKA Mercedes) and their life as a Dom and Domme with their 3 submissives.

 

I had to DNF this story at 40% because there really wasn’t anything going on except lots of sex with various people. There’s nothing wrong with that, but I was expecting more of a story from the blurb. The characters have zero depth and yet their emotions seemed totally out of whack most of the time, going from calm to batshit crazy in .30 seconds and back again. The dialogue is stilted, the timeline is wonky, and there are no transitions between chapters. I couldn’t get any kind of grasp on when this story was taking place. In addition, the author broke the fourth wall and then went back to the story as if nothing happened. Was this supposed to be a memoir? Or is it a fictional story? I have no clue. Also, Ramesses comes across as an arrogant asshole, talking down as if the reader is a drooling moron who knows nothing about the BDSM community and he’s oh so superior because he’s a Dom. I have no idea if that’s what the author intended, but that’s the vibe I got, so I ended up really disliking Ramesses. At 40%, after a dumb scene outside a club, I had to toss in the white towel in exasperation and call it quits.

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review 2015-02-11 14:38
Wicked Wednesday ~ Book 2
Mia's Cop Craving 4 - Swinging All Ways: Police Officer Fantasy (Hot Cop Fantasies) - Malia Mallory

*Book source ~ A review copy was provided in exchange for an honest review.

 

Ever since Mia picked up Rogan in a bar they have been enjoying themselves immensely. One fantasy, two fantasies, three fantasies…four? Rogan has been the best boyfriend ever in guiding Mia through her sexual fantasies. Hot, kinky sex with a cop, a threesome with another man, a threesome with another woman and now, to top them all, a foursome. Jeff and Gillian return to help with that particular fantasy and boy, what a night they have!

 

Sweet Baby Jane! *fans self* Mia is one lucky lady!  The night she picked up Rogan turned out to be the tip of the Best Nights Ever iceberg. Though short the writing is top notch and the heat is off the charts in this installment of Cop Cravings. And that ending! Oh. My! The ending left me smiling from ear to ear.

Source: imavoraciousreader.blogspot.com/2015/02/wicked-wednesday.html
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