A brutal, horrifying, and magnificent story encompassing the primarch Fulgrim's journey from one of the Emperor's chosen ones to an agent of Chaos bent on assisting Horus' vision of all-out galactic war. Having read the previous four in this series, I was able to clearly place where Fulgrim fit in with the overall saga, and McNeill does a masterful job of furthering the saga while describing how elements of this novel mesh with events of the previous four. The civil war that occurs on Isstvan V between various Legions (some traitors, some loyalists where the Emperor is concerned) is nothing short of epic in scope, and the reader should easily pick up on how the galaxy will be grim and dark with war from this point on. That idea is driven home at the end, when it is revealed how the Warp's dark Chaos has infiltrated those traitorous to the Emperor, Fulgrim himself confronting Horus as one of these dark agents. This sets up well for the coming invasion of Terra.

The Horus Heresy novels, which got off to a fantastic, if never quite replicated, start with Dan Abnett's Horus Rising, reach, after a few stumbles, their first major fall with Fulgrim. The text is twice as long as it needs to be and about half as clever as it thinks it is. The gender politics, never the 40k universe's strongpoint in the first place, are particularly lacking in nuance which is a shame considering some of the arcs from the first few books.

 

Really, though, it's just a slog through turgid prose that fails to accept that the reason I'm reading a 40k book is for the violent hunks talking seriously about brotherhood and duty whilst they commit atrocities. 40k only works as a setting when there is a clear ironic detachment between the values of its protagonists and the values of those of us not mired in its horrible world. There are no good guys and, literally metaphysically, there cannot ever be any either.

 

Fulgrim spends too long trying to, in a mirror of the earlier books but without understanding what they were doing, show the fall from grace of its title character. Simultaneously it also spends too long detailing the kind of strategic machinations that would be better left to a few paragraphs in a codex book. What it needed to do was spend more time polishing the few action sequences it had, including sorting out the technical inaccuracies regarding Space Marine physiognomy, and maybe then it would have done Slaanesh proud.

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Galaktyka płonie! Horus wraz z legionami chce zniszczyć ludzkość, oddać ją spaczeniu i Bogom Chaosu. Kolejne legiony odchodzą od Boga Ojca Imperatora, przechodzą na stronę splugawionych. Najlepsi i najwierniejsi z zakonów od wieków cieszących się dobrym imieniem, ulegają zepsuciu, a z drogi, którą obrali nie ma powrotu. Jednym z nich jest Fulgrim.

The fall of Fulgrim, the Primarch of the Emperor's Children legion, is tragic and quite dramatic. It is a descent into madness driven by dark forces for a figure that was brilliant and good for starters. And like a good tragedy, you know that there is no stopping the fates once they get going. Fulgrim is the Primarch of the Emperor's Children, one of the legions of the Emperor of Mankind fighting in the Great Crusade to unify the worlds of men. The Emperor's Children pride themselves in their pursuit of perfection. Unlike other legions, they seek the best and most perfect way to go into combat. They are also haughty and proud. We have met some of their members in previous novels. We met Lucius, the skilled but arrogant swordsman that, in my case, I keep waiting to see him get what is coming to him. Saul Tarvitz, the captain of the 10th Company of the Emperor's Children who is seen as nothing more than a line officer. We have seen Saul in previous novels, so if you have read those, you know of his gallant fate. There are also some new people, and naturally, this is Fulgrim's novel, so he stands larger than life. But the tale is not only about Fulgrim; it is also about his bonds of brotherhood. He is close to Ferrus Manus, the Primarch of the Iron Hands. They are so close that in fact they forged weapons for each other at one point. Fulgrim betrays his brother in arms in a truly tragic way full of pathos. This is probably one of the best passages in the book leading then to their inevitable confrontation. And there are confrontations in this book.We get to see the battle of Isstvan III, but McNeill glosses over it, and if you have read the previous novels, then you know of how Horus betrayed and massacred so many Astartes and their military support units. Now a new battle is coming to Isstvan V as legions loyal to the Emperor come to bring reckoning to Horus. But will they succeed in defeating Horus? Or will the wily traitor have yet another trap at hand? I leave that to the readers to find out saying it will be worth reading. I did not give the book that fifth star because the text is a bit drawn out at times. The book clocks in a bit over 500 pages, and I found it a bit too long. I think a little editing could have made for a leaner, and still good, book. The strength of the book lies in the strong tragic sense of the fall of Fulgrim into darkness and his betrayal of Ferrus Manus. This is almost as good as any Shakespearean tragedy. But madness and darkness do not come to Fulgrim alone. His whole fleet, including the remembrancers are affected as well and fall as well into the darkness of Chaos (Chaos still something that we are gradually learning about in the setting of the 31st Millennium). Adding to this, McNeill does use some very good descriptive detail in the passages about the artists which reinforce the impending doom. Overall, the book is a good addition to the series. It has a good blend of intrigue and action, though the intrigue is not as good as previous novels. I think this is no fault of the author. We already know as readers much of what is to happen already; we are seeing it from a different point of view. This on the one hand is interesting, but I can see where some readers might find it repetitive over time. Fulgrim is quite the figure, and his fall is really a tale worth reading. The author does manage to continue the style and feel of previous books, which means there is good consistency. For fans, I think this is a very good book. For those like me discovering the Horus Heresy series, I think this is a good addition and a good read. It is one I recommend, and I will certainly go look for the next one.