Well that was not so good. I was expecting a hot and sweaty erotic short story and in its place i got an awkward, poorly developed, menial, tiny tale, that was more frustrating than anything else.
The premise was ok, maybe naive and plain but i was looking for that kind of simplicity in this particular read. No matter how basic though the story is i still expect for some semblance of literature. The whole book is hardly 20 pages long, couldn't the author take a look at it and do a spell check? Am i asking for too much?
Anyway, like i said, this is nothing much so yeah! Ta ta for now!
THOUGHTS ABOUT THE BOOK
- Some editing issues.
- I liked how shy Danny was.
- Stale usage of the language. Manhood, again and again!!??