
Author – Andrea Speed
Star rating - ★★☆☆☆
No. of Pages – 1228
POV – 3rd person, multi POV
Would I read it again – No
Genre – Paranormal, LGBT, Supernatural
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine
So, I've been waiting to read this book for a long time. The blurbs intrigued me, everyone kept raving about it and I'm a series lover, so I was interested right from the start. Sadly, it didn't work for me.
This bundle contains 6 novels. I got to the end of one. Although, really, I feel like I should say 0.5, because the cover of this bundle says that Prey is book 1, but Infected is actually book 1, according to the writing inside the book, and that's the only one I finished. I didn't even get around to Prey or Paris, which some people said would change my mind about the book. Unfortunately, I just don't have the will to keep going, not when I know that forcing myself to keep reading a book I'm not enjoying is only going to be detrimental to me and to the author. I don't want to write a review after I feel frustrated and angry because I forced myself to read something I don't like; that's no good for either of us, so I'm ending it on a note of indifference.
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Book One: Infected
0-11%
Warning: This story deals with suicide, child pornography, alcoholism, kidnapping, rape and drug use.
The story is told in 3rd person, but I really didn't feel comfortable with it, for whatever reason. It felt, at times, like it was a 1st person narrative in a 3rd person disguise. That we were being the kind of information and thoughts that were generally kept to a 1st person POV, and it didn't sit well with me. It felt uncomfortable and awkward right from page one. The fact that it took 11 chapters (6%) to switch to Paris' POV didn't help, either.
The POV's were jumbled, started with Hank (who got killed on that same page) then shifting to Roan for the next 10 chapters. In Chapters 11 and 14, then the Epilogue, Paris took his POV for a little while, with one cat POV (Paris) for maybe three paragraphs at the end, somewhere. And then there was Mitch's POV (who also got killed on that page). Really, 90% of the story was Roan's to tell and Paris' POV really wouldn't have been necessary except in one case, because he did something useful that Roan wasn't there to see. But the second POV was pointless; he took on a case that they didn't even investigate, because Roan took one look at a picture and solved it.
To make it worse, page 1 started the beginning of Chapter 1 and yet, it began with a character who died before the end of the page. Now, I feel this should have either been a Prologue, to set the stage for what was to come, or it shouldn't have been included. Personally, it gave too much of the story away, for my liking. There was really no need for Hank, our first victim, to give his own POV. It didn't offer anything that we didn't learn from Roan's investigation and it didn't feel at all important for pushing the story forward. In fact, it ruined the suspense of what could have been a great intro, where Roan goes home to find Paris was loose as a cat all night. That wouldn't have felt important right away, until Roan's got the phone call about Hank. Then it would have been a great moment of suspense; did Paris get out? Had he done something awful? Did he have anything to do with this? Instead, we knew the moment Roan found Paris loose that there had already been a cat killing and it killed the suspense for me. It came across as a really obvious plot ploy to get us to immediately believe that Paris had done this, when it was clearly too obvious and clean cut to have been him. If it had, there would have been no book, unless he and Roan went on the run. Which the blurb told us never happened.
When it comes to the world building, I had trouble with it. Again, it felt a little too much like parts of this “world” were held back from us until it made the biggest impact in the story. But, in doing so, it meant that I was blindly stumbling my way through an unfamiliar world. There were only hints of what “the strain” and being a “virus child” meant, by the end of Chapter 1, and it took right until the last pages to discover some important facts about the creatures these Infected had become. It took 12 chapters to find out who Connor was, yet it often gave us extraneous information that we didn't need in the place of things we actually wanted to know.
I didn't mind the writing style, as I've read another novel by this author that I loved. But it felt much more disjointed than that other novel; less cohesive, more drifting and with less attention to detail. The characters, Roan especially, had a tendency to waffle on about unimportant things at the most obscure times. Often about things that were totally pointless, like detailing the exact specs of a gun, detailing how the appliances of their homes have name tags (?? Why ??) There are times where it feels like an idiot's guide to useless information, like describing cop's gallow's humour in detail, as if no one had ever seen a crime/detective show before. For the amount of information and detail that went into these things, it would have been better spend on world building and letting us feel more comfortable in a world we knew nothing about when we turned the first page. And don't even get me started on the constant parenthesis! I mean, they were everywhere and they added absolutely nothing to the characterisation or the plot. I could easily have deleted them or not read any of them and it would have made no different whatsoever, which makes me wonder why they were there in the first place.
I also wasn't a fan of slagging off everything in sight. I'm not sure if it was the author's taste's bleeding into the writing or if Roan was just meant to be so judgy and unlikeable, but I'm kind of shocked that any sane publisher or editor would allow anyone to slag off the likes of Paris Hilton, Coldplay and American Idol in one of their novels. In this world, people can get sued for pulling stunts like that and it really puts a barrier between the reader and author/book, if that person is a fan of those things, only to have to read them being slagged off. I mean, the stuff about Courtney Love might have been tabloid common knowledge but it's also not a great idea professionally.
Now, I'm no fan of any of these things, but I had to look at it like a professional and it just didn't work for me. It was rude, obnoxious and it made me feel like Roan was a person that I really just didn't want to be anywhere near. I don't mind a little sarcasm or pessimism in my characters, but when they dive right into showing contempt and disdain for everything in their path, then it's a turn off, not a personality quirk. I also don't know why I'd be expected to love a character like Paris who is labelled, multiple times, as the perfect liar, chameleon and manipulator. Those are not positive traits and they really made me question whether this series was for me or not, the moment that was mentioned the first time. And all that talk of Slutty McWhore? Seriously? That's supposed to be endearing? Slut shaming a character and then having them slut shame themselves? Nope. Not for me. At the same time, I have to wonder why they're even together, because I felt very little chemistry and Roan spent the majority of the book worrying that everyone Paris tried to “charm” would steal him away or make Paris cheat on him. He had a serious complex about their 5 year age difference and Paris' past as a self-proclaimed whore. A term I hate with a passion.
I, quite honestly, nearly DNF'd this book three times, mostly before the halfway mark. I just didn't care what happened, I didn't like Roan or Paris, I didn't care who the killer was or why they did it. The book just wasn't engaging enough to make me keep reading, even at that point. But, I pushed through, because it's a review book. But, when nothing changed, I knew I wasn't going to be going any further with the series. I finished book 1 and that was all I needed to read, to know that this world, this series and I were never going to see eye to eye. No mater how intriguing the concept or the blurbs of the future books, I can't follow a series where I hate the two MC's.
The ex-cop turned private detective, who hates being a cop but weasels into cases, was very stereotypical, as were all the comparisons to other famous P.I.'s. It made Roan feel somewhat of a joke as a private detective, because he couldn't even take his own job seriously. He just wanted to be a cop without actually being a cop.
The established couple concept was good. I liked that it didn't get hot and heavy all the time, with only off-page sex and nothing explicit at all in those terms on page. I liked the idea of the five separate strains of 'infection', but the seriously judgy, bitchy, condescending MC's who were cynical, bitter and had a chip on their shoulder, while manipulating everyone in sight and using so-called “charisma and charm” to get what they wanted ruined it for me. While the story had bags of potential and could have been an incredibly unique venture into the world of shifters, it left me feeling indifferent about the plot and downright hating the MC's.
Overall, the story (and series) had great potential, but it was just so laborious to wade through the excess detail/description/plot tricks that it just wore me down.