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review 2019-12-12 05:05
Save the Date by Monica Murphy
Save The Date (Dating #1) - Monica Murphy

Caroline Abbott works at a high end stationary store that sells a lot of wedding-related stuff, like save the date cards, wedding invitations, and thank you cards. She's used to dealing with bridezillas, so her newest customer, Tiffany, doesn't throw her much, but the identity of Tiffany's fiance does. It turns out that Tiffany is getting married to Alex Wilder, Caroline's first crush. The last time they saw each other was when she was 12 and he was 14. He gave her her first kiss and then disappeared.

It's a shock to see Alex again, especially like this. When she was a kid, Caroline never realized that Alex came from a wealthy family. It's a bit strange that he's getting married so quickly, only a month or so after meeting Tiffany, and he doesn't even seem to like her much. But Caroline tries to be professional, do her job, and not ogle Alex, who is definitely no longer the gawky boy he used to be. Then she accidentally discovers that Tiffany is cheating on Alex, and things become even more complicated.

This was one of my Book Bonanza purchases. I tend to be drawn to illustrated covers, and this looked cute and fun. I went into this expecting a zany romantic comedy in which Caroline and Alex would awkwardly try to reconnect while dodging Tiffany's probably over-the-top attempts at getting revenge against Caroline and/or Alex. Instead, the writing style made me question what genre I was dealing with - Caroline's first person present tense POV felt more chick lit than romantic comedy, to me - and Caroline and Alex's early flirtation, prior to Caroline discovering that Alex was one of her newest customers, had me wondering whether it was actually going to be Alex who cheated first rather than Tiffany.

While Caroline and Alex didn't kiss or even spend much time together until after Alex learned about Tiffany's cheating and ended their engagement, it still felt uncomfortably like Tiffany was set up for failure. She was horrible and annoying and, even so, I felt a bit sorry for her. From the sounds of things, after the initial shine of their relationship wore off, Alex basically stopped paying much attention to Tiffany, spent most of his time at work, and procrastinated on getting her an engagement ring. Yeah, Tiffany was a gold digger who rushed him into a wedding, but he let himself be rushed. It was like he just couldn't be bothered to break up with her and was going to marry her because it was easier than telling her "no."

Which, honestly, didn't make him an appealing romantic hero. The parts of the book from his POV came across as wooden and boring, and my impression of him only worsened after he and Caroline decided to succumb to their attraction to each other. I think readers were supposed to see them as a better, more solid couple than Alex and Tiffany, but instead I saw Caroline as Alex's Tiffany 2.0. Just like with Tiffany, their relationship started off with lots of bouts of fantastic sex (fantastic for them - I considered the first person present tense sex scenes to be gross and stilted). When things got tough just before the end of the book, though, and Alex had to make a decision between trusting and supporting Caroline or doubting her, he chose the latter. It emphasized that these two characters still didn't really know or trust each other, and the happy ending, after Alex did a bit of groveling, felt hollow.

Also, this was a very small part of the book, but I still wanted to bring it up: I didn't like the way the author used Alex's younger brother, James. Alex had two siblings, his sister Meredith and his younger brother James. James was autistic. It was mentioned that he worked as an accountant in the family business and seemed to be pretty good at it. At one point, Alex thought about how James had told him that he felt like their parents were babying him (he still lived with their parents, and it sounded like they were very protective). Alex privately agreed with James...but also expected that James would one day move in with either Meredith or him, so I didn't really see how he was any different from their parents, not even entertaining the idea that James might want more independence. It also bugged me that, while Meredith got a small speaking role in the book, James didn't. For someone who was supposedly so important to Alex, he had almost no presence.

Caroline had a group of friends who all gave off "future heroine in this series" vibes. However, none of them particularly drew me in, and after the issues I had with Save the Date, I have no intention of trying another one of this author's books.

 

(Original review posted on A Library Girl's Familiar Diversions.)

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text 2019-12-12 03:35
Reading progress update: I've read 330 out of 330 pages.
Save The Date (Dating #1) - Monica Murphy

No.

 

About 30 pages before the end, Alex screwed up pretty majorly, in a way that emphasized that he and Caroline don't actually know each other very well. He does a bit of groveling and basically asks for a do-over, and then we get a "one year later" epilogue in which they're very happy together. Meanwhile, I'm not sure what I just read, but I wouldn't call it a romance. This was marked as chick lit by a few users on Goodreads, but I'm not sure I'd call it that either.

 

Anyway, yay, I'm done with this. It won't be staying in my collection, and I don't plan on reading any of the author's other books.

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text 2019-12-11 15:20
Reading progress update: I've read 290 out of 330 pages.
Save The Date (Dating #1) - Monica Murphy

I was right, I really am going to finish this quickly. But first I have to suffer through a first person present tense sex scene or two. Ewww.

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text 2019-12-10 17:34
Reading progress update: I've read 180 out of 330 pages.
Save The Date (Dating #1) - Monica Murphy

If Caroline were a friend of mine and told me the whole story of Alex and Tiffany, and Alex repeatedly texted and tried to call Caroline (after their one "this is maybe a date" date) while we were talking, and then Alex suddenly showed up to ask Caroline to be his pretend fiancee in Paris with only 48 hours worth of notice, I would be concerned.

 

Not Caroline's friends, though. They think that Alex is "the one that got away" (because they kissed the last time they saw each other, when he was 14 and she was 12). They also think that she totally shouldn't let scary-mad Tiffany and the fact that she doesn't actually know adult Alex very well get in the way of what will surely be a great relationship.

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text 2019-12-09 14:45
Reading progress update: I've read 130 out of 330 pages.
Save The Date (Dating #1) - Monica Murphy

Well, this is looking like a quick read, at least, just not one that's really for me. At the moment, I'm leaning towards a solid 2 stars.

 

Murphy's writing is nicely fluffy, but she needs a better editor. There have been a few really noticeable errors (a paragraph break in the middle of a sentence, the word "sign" used when it should have been "sigh," the word "void" instead of "devoid," etc.), and the repetition I noticed at the very beginning continues to be a thing (I'm so tired of hearing about how Caroline has used multiple dating apps but still hasn't found the right guy). The Alex POV bits are wooden and boring, and it's so difficult to believe that Alex would ever have proposed to someone like Tiffany that I have a tough time seeing their relationship as anything but a thin excuse to put Alex in Caroline's path. I actually feel kind of bad for Tiffany, even though I dislike her.

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