Crisis by Rokudenashi
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

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WTF Hawt! Tentacles monster hard fucking a Superhero, poor guy was speared by a gigantic blue cock which is the size of a large male's arm, some deep throat kissing and ohlala... tentacles urethral sounding. *bliss*

Poor Bolt was fucked his brains out! How I love his moaning and pleading.

And that ending was SO wicked! I love it!



* Reviewed on August 18th, 2014

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The Pet Whisperer by liliaeth
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
Read from April 05 to 08, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1

What a Horrifying and Disturbing Story! I have been forcefully defiled. Mind Raped!

I admit it does have some entertainment value, but the munching on humans killed me. I mean I love the angst and liked the wicked pet training, but.... PLEASE! DO NOT EAT PEOPLE! Argh!

Humans as main course on the dining table of Gods. *dying* Gods hunting humans as food, even the children aren't safe. *dies in agony* Keeping humans as livestock for their juicy meat. *am so dead* Some of luckier ones are kept as household slaves, and the luckiest are those pretty ones which the Gods kept as eye-candies aka pets. The pets aren't exactly safe from ending up on the table as well. Da fuq!

How I wish this story could just focus on the pet training and leave out the grisly stuff. Each time I think of it... I.... *pukes everywhere* The slaughter of innocents both angers and sickens me so much I could feel my soul burning at the atrocities happening at every turn of the story. The author is sure brave and daring but too over-the-top with the horror aspect, it squicked me out even knowing she might be trying to deliver her message on animal abuse and to encourage vegetarianism.

The thing is, this story is utterly disturbing and horrifying as the amount of outright cannibalism overshadowed the pet training aspect eventhough petplay should be the main focus of this story as per suggested by its title and blurb. I kept on reading this morbid tale because I couldn't stop until I find out what would happen to Dean at the end.

WARNING: You really can't unseen what you have seen. For sure this is NOT for the faint-of-heart unless you are into gore and cannibalism. Beware of being eaten alive while kicking and screaming even your soul aren't spared. If you could curb your curiosity, I would advice you to stay away from this. The blurb didn't have any warning on the extreme cannibalism. I did blame myself for not checking out the story tags throughly before diving into it.

I am pretty sure that title and blurb would potentially leads unsuspecting readers who are looking forward to some petplay fun with added bonus of the famous Castiel-Dean pairing into the darkest void of evil and then gets drown in human misery so great one would felt scarred for life; speaking from the view of a traumatized reader. I have no way out now, it's too late for me. Go safe yourself!

Da fuq I've just read. @_@;
I need fluff pronto!

THE RATING
I am giving this a 2 stars not entirely because of the disturbing nature of the in-depth cannibalism, it is also due to the quality of the writing itself. There are parts where the plots fails and the characters has OOC moments here and there. I am also deducting points for not staying focus on the promised petplay theme. To be clear, I did appreciate the parts on the pet training and the melding of multiple mythologies with modern religion.

To put it in other words, this story is as entertaining as an intense nightmare you fought to wake up from.



STORY DETAILS:
Title: The Pet Whisperer
Author: liliaeth
Publication Date: July 21st, 2012
Type: Fanfiction of the Supernatural TV Series, 66,475 words (Completed fanfic)
Genre: Alternate Universe M/M-F/M-M/F Fan Fiction, Horror
Characters: Castiel, Dean Winchester, Original Female Character(s), Hades (Greek and Roman Mythology), Demeter & Persephone (Greek and Roman Mythology), God (Supernatural), God!Castiel
Tags/Keywords:

cannibalism, vore, pagan gods, eating humans, dehumanization, slavery, dubious consent, body modification, sounding, butt plugs, piercings, conditioning, rape, pet training, bisexual, gay, heterosexual, multiple partners, breeding

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Description:
The pagan goddess Despoine is widely regarded as the best trainer of human pets in the supernatural world. When the new god Castiel demands her aid in training his pet Dean, she definitely knows better than to say no.

Words:66,475 Complete - Chapters:19/19 - Free Download
Supernatural Fanfic




* Reviewed on April 8th, 2014

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THEY WON THEY WON THEY WON THEY WON THEY WON! Shohoku won!

 

This match was so awesome I can't even.....

 

Oh, I think I've decided that I like Mitsui now. At least, I love him while he's playing. I hope he's still awesome when he's not playing, and it was just a glitch with my brain that kept me from liking him until now. I'll have to see.

 

As always, the dialogue between these characters is absolutely one-hundred-percent priceless. I just can't get over how much I've laughed at them all. And the characters, they're so perfect. I love them all so much. I could watch Akagi and Sakuragi be jerks to each other all day. Or Rukawa and Sakuragi. Or Ryota and Sakuragi. Or any of them, really.

 

There's this one scene in this volume where Rukawa actually walks up to Sakuragi and asks him a civil question - he just wants to know what Sakuragi's afraid of, and what's holding him back. Of course he tilts his head and looks all arrogant about it - he's goading Sakuragi, trying to make him give everything he's got (and maybe to get him kicked out of the game, too).

 

But Sakuragi just explodes. For once Rukawa said something to him that wasn't an outright taunt, and Sakuragi just hears the part where he was accused of being afraid - like an echo, over and over and over again - and.....I can't even.....

 

Sorry. There's just no way I can describe these people with words.

I dunno...I can't decide if this makes me want to knife-self or not...(You know, like this:)I just...Okay, first off, I don't like sounding.I mean, it was good, but this is one of those things that I can't decide if I enjoyed reading or not because it's so unsettling. The editing is terrible, as is, I should mention, the blurb. I mean, what the fuck is up with that?

Took me a really really long time before I finished this book. (Sorry Ms.Carrie) thank you for sending me a copy of this book to review even if i'm on the other side of the world :) this review will be written with complete honesty so, good or bad,know that how i got a copy does not in any way influence my opinions on the story itself. Anyway...Let me start by saying that this is not a book for a light easy breezy reader. This is packed with so much information to it. It might be a little difficult for some people to read, Admittedly, even I had trouble getting into it at the beginning but I found that the key here really is to read the story continously, don't do anything else, don't let yourself get distracted by some other things or whatever because once you do, you might find yourself lost while reading the rest of the chapters. the events were very detailed , heavy on biblical references and prophecies which is unique but I don't think that the reader would have any problem reading this book if he/she have not read the book of revelations from the bible. (because i haven't but i understood and I liked the story)The story was well executed , the characters were very much alive, there weren't some characters that felt distant to the story and to the point the author is trying to make and it makes you wonder, i loved the mystery and the quest, over allit was a great book. I was just a bit overwhelmed by the number of pages in the bookand how small the writing was that I got scared of reading, cause I felt like it had a bit of a complicated textbook feel which turned out to be complete paranoia on my end.4 stars :)