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review 2015-04-02 00:00
Pretty When You Cry: BDSM Erotica Short Stories
Pretty When You Cry: BDSM Erotica Short ... Pretty When You Cry: BDSM Erotica Short Stories - Keith Anderson BDSM fantasies from a male author seems to be dirty and a bit more taboo. Mr. Anderson easily scores on both counts and it is guiltily arousing. He is a new to me author and I want to read more. If this short anthology is just a taste of what is to come, I can't wait for the next book. The story themes are erotic and plausibly realistic.

The BDSM scenes in this book are too short. For the most part, they are well described which provides for a good visual. The knife story is my favourite one. It is an impressive one because out of the hundreds of BDSM stories I've read over the past few years, this is the only one of its kind. The scene takes edgeplay to what most readers are not comfortable with and for those who are lifestylers, it's a new scene to try. Based on how BDSM is written in this story, I would guess Mr. Anderson is in the lifestyle. The responses of the bottom and the setup of the scenes are authentic and lends credibility to his experience. If he isn't in the lifestyle then he does good research.

What would make this better is if Mr. Anderson writes longer story. If Pretty Little Lies can be expanded with the main character Jax, it would be delightful. Be it character or plot driven, knife scenes perhaps with interrogation mixed in it would pull several darker kinksters in. Another one which would be great to expand upon is All You Ever Wanted. The plot twist in this short story is taboo and in much demand with dark readers. Although usually, it's m/m in more demand than f/f. This short story is well crafted with tension. Then a surprise reveal with depraved sexual torture makes the story supernova hot. The story ends too quickly and leaves plenty of opening for more. There are several questions I have for Mr. Anderson about Chad, Rose and Alyssa. The possibilities make my mind whirl in feverish anticipation and moistens my panties.

Another recommendation is better transitions between scenes. Using hashtags to separate is jarring. Perhaps it is because these are short stories, the separator is used. My preference is using chapters and better transitions between time differences. Otherwise, readers will come out of the story and not enjoy it as much.

Whilst I loath to say this, I must admit it - sex sells. Readers who enjoy this style of kinky sex stories will not need much character development if there is plenty of dirty filthy porn sex. This is not to say raunchy and crude sex with terrible dialog between characters will gain better reviews. It's to say the more graphic sex paired with humiliation, degradation or taboo will increase the naughty factor and most likely appeal to the taboo reading crowd. With character development, specifically characters which are loved or hated, it will increase a reader's desire to talk about a book and recommend it.

Lastly, if Mr. Anderson keeps his writing voice with lovely gems as below, it will be memorable.

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review 2014-03-14 01:57
Dumb Short
Restraint - Charlotte Stein

This story was super hot and I loved the set up, just wish it was a longer novella or even a full length novella. Luckily Stein has tons of stories to read that cut the mustard so I can just pick up another title.

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review 2014-01-27 00:00
The Quickie Sexy and Short Erotica Story
The Quickie Sexy and Short Erotica Story - Kitty Fine WOW!!! For a free and quick read, this was fantastic!!! Be warned: this book is very short but very hot, and you might be hooked on Kitty Fine!!!
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text 2013-12-20 11:12
More loot today!
Naughty Claus (Paranormal Tentacle Erotica Short Story) - Marina Probain
Paranormal Pleasures: Ten Paranormal Erotica Stories - CJ Smalls,Cassiopea Trawley,Autumn Crowl,Diana Katsaros,Cordelia Montgomery,Caroline Cox,Kandace Tunn,Kaddy DeLora,Molly Synthia,Tawna Bickley
TENTACLES IN EVERY HOLE: An Alien Monster Sex Double Penetration Short - CJ Smalls

Yay!   More tentacle erotica!

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review 2013-01-24 00:00
The Little Red Kilt (Short Provocative E... The Little Red Kilt (Short Provocative Erotica) - Elizabeth Woodham This is a very quick read, and it comes to the boil a lot quicker than my kettle!

It is a very hot piece of writing, written in the style of a diary and in the first person singular.

Miss Merryweather certainly knows how to take control of a man and to get him exactly where she wants him. And she does exactly that on New Year's Eve 2012/13. A tartan microskirt, with black lace tights and no knickers help her cause, but she knows what she is doing. Her prey is at her mercy!

That is not to say that he doesn't extract a similar amount of pleasure from the encounter.

Perhaps you'll get the same level of pleasure whilst reading this shortie about a shortie too. The only way to find out is to read it, and it's just a quickie!
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