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photo 2017-06-26 18:01

Plus, fiction makes more sense!

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review 2017-06-21 08:46
Even the title is layered
A Room with a View - E.M. Forster

I feel like I read a book twice as long as this was, not because it was heavy or difficult, but because it was so tightly woven. There were layers of meaning, and so much that could be inferred, and for such short pages, many characters get well fleshed out. No line is wasted. There is this... English brevity, I guess, that makes me recall the meandering tone of "Passage to India". Says something about what must characterize each people in Forster's mind, huh?

It is also a quiet way to depict a fast and turbulent romance, which feels weird in a "still waters run deep" kind of way. There is this three-way war going, between mind, heart and manners (or is it pride?, self-image? calcified indecision?), it is evident when you get to the lying chapters, and the weather tends to illustrate it, but before then, before Lucy looses her temper at Miss Bartlet at the beginning of them out of revelatory fright, it's all so sedate. On the outside; Lucy's facing the exterior gets a companion chapter on "The disaster within". She's running from love: it is scary, exiting, something unknown, and unrecognized, and social mores don't help her in disentangling from the muddle.

On the side, we get some awesome darts thrown into time old hypocrisy, such as how emancipated women are perceived or "accepted"; how men think women think about men; people abroad; obligation as it pertains to favors out of honesty (Emerson) or self-serving humbleness (Charlotte); and bunch of stuff I either posted already, or have marked down and can't speedily condense here. In case the main course wasn't enough.

Seriously, this guy had a way with words.

 

Note: I have to get another copy. Mine was abysmally translated. I turned to a digital version in original English after 20 pages or so. If you read in Spanish, avoid translator Marta Pessarrodona. She's a menace and a beast. Word confusions (she translated kitten instead of kite, for example), wrong conjugations (translated "would have" as present simple), change of punctuation, which changes pace drastically and unnecessarily (specifically, Cecil's entrance is most egregious), change of meaning of whole paragraphs (to the point of reading as the opposite). And it ts only what I caught just searching for the paragraphs I wanted to mark down as memorable while reading the digital copy! Much of this I could not understand of someone supposedly getting paid. It would have been more difficult to invent as she did.

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text 2017-06-20 16:25
Reading progress update: I've read 43%.
The Siren - Tiffany Reisz

 

 

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text 2017-06-17 12:46
Reading progress update: I've read 25 out of 240 pages.
A Room with a View - E.M. Forster

Much like with "Passage to India", this is a book to savor for the way it's written and the highly quotable dialogues. So far, in less than two chapters

 

“He is rather a peculiar man.” Again he hesitated, and then said gently: “I think he would not take advantage of your acceptance, nor expect you to show gratitude. He has the merit—if it is one—of saying exactly what he means. He has rooms he does not value, and he thinks you would value them. He no more thought of putting you under an obligation than he thought of being polite. It is so difficult—at least, I find it difficult—to understand people who speak the truth.”

 

Love how he establishes both old Emerson's and Beebe's characters through the later's judgment.

 

“About old Mr. Emerson—I hardly know. No, he is not tactful; yet, have you ever noticed that there are people who do things which are most indelicate, and yet at the same time—beautiful?”
“Beautiful?” said Miss Bartlett, puzzled at the word. “Are not beauty and delicacy the same?”
“So one would have thought,” said the other helplessly. “But things are so difficult, I sometimes think.”

 

“Look at him!” said Mr. Emerson to Lucy. “Here’s a mess: a baby hurt, cold, and frightened! But what else can you expect from a church?

 

“My dear,” said the old man gently, “I think that you are repeating what you have heard older people say. You are pretending to be touchy; but you are not really. Stop being so tiresome, and tell me instead what part of the church you want to see. To take you to it will be a real pleasure.”
Now, this was abominably impertinent, and she ought to have been furious. But it is sometimes as difficult to lose one’s temper as it is difficult at other times to keep it.

 

More establishing of old Emerson (I'm half in love with the old man) and some prickly observations on society too. Forster really likes to point hypocrisy, and that's part of why I've loved what I've read by him so far.

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text 2017-06-16 15:45
Personal Essay Writing Steps

A good piece of writing includes more than just following a set of directions. Students understand this more than anyone else. Whether you’re in college or completing an assignment, personal experiences with writing essays can be a crucial factor in determining your final grade in your course. A personal essay is a source of inspiration for many people. It may leave the reader with lots of questions than answers. For a student to come up with a real personal essay, it is important to understand the main structure of the essay.

 

The first step is to brainstorm different ideas so that you’re ready to draft an essay that reflects on your experience. If you find it hard, you can seek for “write my essay” help from experienced essay companies.

So, here are some easy steps to help you write a killer personal essay.

Come up with an idea and strategy

The first step is to find what angle to take before writing the essay.

Of course not so many of us would confess that life has been all about exciting stories but that’s not a big deal. You can still hook up your reader with an engaging personal essay if you find what angle to take with the essay. Look for a moment or experience in your life. Lovely memory is easier to describe the idea while writing personal essay at the best paper writing service WriteMyPaper.Today

 

For instance, picture a moment when you failed a math’s quiz. Although this quiz may seem insignificant at first, you later realized how failing the quiz made you reevaluate your goals and get the motivation to even do better. When you see it from that angle, your failure becomes a bridge for success.

Create an outline

A good personal essay will be geared towards trying to unravel a certain experience that may have led to conflict at one time in your life. Writing a personal essay allows you to express yourself and explore how you were hurt by that experience. It gives you a chance to describe an event and recall its effect on your life.

 

You can also explore a moment or event that prompted an emotional response. In most cases, personal essays are used as a reflection on a certain event that happened in your life that may have led to a shift in your thinking. So, take a moment and reflect on a certain unique or strange event that occurred to you. The stranger it is, the more you’re likely to write an engaging essay.

 

For instance, you may decide to write about how you grieved about the death of your mother. Think of the experience that hardened you to face other challenges in life. Or you can hire an essay writing service to write about a light occasion, such as the first time you went skydiving with your friend. Whatever event you pick, just make sure it involves an event that led to an emotional feeling that was followed by anger, frustration, or overwhelming joy.

Structure your essay

Start by writing an engaging opening. Begin your essay with an engaging and interesting introductory section to capture your reader’s attention. When making your essay writing plan begin with the introduction. The main points to include in this section are the key characters of your personal essay and include a central theme of your essay.

 

Start with a scene with the main characters and the problem statement of your essay to introduce your reader to what the essay is all about.

 

Then take a unique opinion. Personal essays are more engaging when essay writers use a friendly tone that entertains the reader. This includes using the correct choice of word, tone, and syntax to create an appealing voice in your personal essay.

 

In this case, the writer is left to choose what they want. They may choose to use a conversational voice, like how you speak to a friend one on one, or the writing voice may be reflective, where you question your views about the theme of the essay.

Lastly, make sure you describe the main characters with physical and sensory detail. These elements will draw the reader’s attention and keep them engaged throughout the essay.

 

By now you must have a complete personal essay. All that is left is proofreading and editing to correct grammar and spelling mistakes to make it perfect. You can do this by re-reading your initial draft loud to discover the mistakes that may have been left when reading silently.

 

That’s it. Finally, you got a complete personal essay.

 

 

 

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