Collared by Kari Gregg
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
3.5 Stars for this testosterone-dazed world of genetic mutation. Gotta love the classical dance of the prey and the predator
I love and appreciate the originality of the premise - A crops engineering disaster caused the mutation of human genetics which leads to dramatic increase in aggressive traits in 99% of the population, only 1% was on the opposite scale. This 1% in the population was known as 'the anomalies'. The mutation has affected them differently as their submissive traits was increased dramatically, so much so that they are no longer capable of self-preservation. These anomalies are in constant state of confusion induced by fear hence in need of a strong protector to survive the new world order in which their kinds are stripped of all rights and status. Soon they are going to be nothing but slaves or pets for the dominants to toy with as they like. Just a piece of property to be owned and used as their betters deemed fit. Needless to say such a premise with absolute power-imbalance as the driving force, angst is a guaranteed scenario. In other words, this a total angst junkie fix.
Connor's state of mind was pretty convincing. We get to witness his struggles to adapt to the rapid changes in his environment and the deterioration of his control over his own will as the mutation takes hold of his mind.
In the name of protection Connor's boss collared him as temporary measure until a suitable master is found. Although Connor craves for David Martin to be his Sir permanently, David was unable to reciprocate as he is straight and already has a fiancée. How would David's fiancée reacts to Connor and would he have a chance to call David his Sir?
Connor has admired handsome Emmett Drake long before the disaster struck. And now he was overwhelmed by Emmett's attention and domineering pursuit to own him as his pet. Does Emmett only sees him as a mere toy to break or was Connor more than just a piece of property?
The journey towards total submission is an extra difficult road for Connor to travel. His previous painful relationship with his abusive ex-lover has left a deep mental scar behind. A broken Connor coupled with his newfound uncontrollable need to submit was torn in trusting another man again. To him it was like jumping from the frying pan into the fire, only this time it was an inferno waiting for him. Would he be consumed by the fire or rise like a phoenix from the ashes?
One man is home and safety the other excites and scratches Connor's itch for deep submission. Who should he surrender his heart and soul to? This unique dystopia story would certainly appeal to D/S and TPE fans. And like I've said before, angst-junkies would also be pleased with it.
I was drawn into the story just after a couple of pages. Got me some of those lovely body-tingles I loved so much whenever a story touches my kinks in a feel-good way. Nice orgasmic little buzz all over until David starts to get on my nerve. To me he is a selfish greedy bastard who wants the best of both worlds. I am not happy with the way he treats his fiancée as it was very unfair, it clearly shows us his unfaithful adulterous heart. I also didn't like the way David thinks he has the right to ask for Connor's submission when he knows perfectly well he could not answer Connor's real needs. David is just a goddamn cockblocker to me! Yeah, I root for Emmett to be Connor's master all the way. At least Emmett knows what he is doing and he has the capacity to give Connor what he deserved and needs. Gawd! I nearly strangled Connor over his indecisiveness in choosing between the two. The maths was so easy a two years old could solved it. NO. I am not happy with that superficial ending. It felt rushed and unreal. I couldn't reconcile David's action at all. So fuck that ending!
Okay so aside from the body-tingles what I did love about this story was the focus on the D/S and the uber hot sex scenes. Two studly doms aggressively posturing each other for dominance in order to fight for the ownership of a sub was way hot. Additionally the premise captured my attention as well as my heart. Oh and the angst was pretty satisfying too.
BOOK DETAILS:
Title: Collared
Author: Kari Gregg
Publication Date: November 28th, 2011
Publisher: Riptide Publishing
Genre: Gay Dystopia Fiction, Erotica, Science Fiction
Type: Novella, approximately 33,573 words
Main Characters: Connor Witt (MC), David Martin (Secondary Character), Emmett Drake (Secondary Character)
Tags/Keywords:
dystopia, genetic mutation, genetic disaster, D/S, dominance-submission, master-slave, master-pet, slave fiction, slavefic, TPE (total-power-exchange), BDSM, alternate universe, dom-sub, collaring, collar
Description:
Trans-Global IT director Connor Witt is a rare and prized anomaly: the aggression centers in his brain have been suppressed rather than stimulated by the mutated crops that so recently took over the world’s food supply. Bewildered by his physical changes and terrified of a world growing more and more predatory, Connor risks harassment and worse until Trans-Global CEO David Martin collars Connor to protect him against men like security consultant Emmett Drake. Men who stalk Connor as sweet, sexy prey. Men to whom the newly submissive Connor feels irresistibly drawn.
But David can’t be Connor’s master; David’s straight. He promises to find a worthy man, though. One willing to court and appreciate Connor as more than just some rich man’s toy.
While the world adapts to the biological disaster and new laws strip away Connor’s rights, David’s resolve to protect his boy slowly grows into something more. But can his new desires keep pace with Emmett’s determination to claim Connor?
One man offers safety; the other is a safer bet. Problem is, Connor’s never sure which is which. The one thing he does know? He wants them both.
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Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce My rating: 5 of 5 stars
If I have a soaking-wet-panties-shelf here on GR, this book would definitely be on it.
Therefore 5 Brilliant Lip-Smacking Stars for this high quality collection of BDSM erotica.
It's a must read for all TPE (Total Power Exchange) fans. Especially those who loves good doses of manhandling and masculinity in their BDSM stories.
Contained within its pages are Master/Slave Fantasies that shows us how consensual slavery could be a very fulfilling and erotic experience. Apart from that it also enlightens us on what makes a dom or a sub tick.
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STORY #1: Collared at the Dog Pound - Sub's POV
An exciting lost-pup-finds-a-master story.
Said pup quickly found himself in a hot mess of pain and pleasure under the firm hands of his new found master. The ending plastered a wide smile on my face.
Story codes/tags: D/S, Dog Slave, Watersports, Rough Sex, Masturbation, Anal Sex, Hot Manhandling, Breathplay
RATING: 4 stars
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STORY #2: Hard Day's Reward - Sub's POV
A master kept his slave under stringent orgasm control and denied him release even when he was mercilessly stimulated. The master then rewarded his obedient slave with a fresh juicy boy. It's the best reward for the slave as he used to be a Top before submitting as a full-time slave now. He especially enjoys breaking boys with attitude issue.
This story made me want to crawl into the book to play along with the guys. I wanted to own that juicy ass! It was such a pleasure watching a slave turned into a full-fledged master displaying his prowess at owning a cocky young slave's ass. Expertly turning him into true boymeat, whimpering and begging to be fucked. The boy moans so sweetly and so eagerly it's like music to my ears.
I would give this story a 10 stars if I could. It's one of the hottest story in this sexy anthology.
Story codes/tags: D/S, Anal Sex, Slave vs Slave, Collar & leash, Manhandling, Blowjob, Humiliation-degradation
RATING: 10 rewarding stars
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STORY #3: Goodnight, My Slaveboys - Dom's POV
A master who owns a total of 5 slaves. Every night he would tenderly tucks each one of his securely bound slaves to bed. They are all perfectly well trained loyal slaveboys who eats cums like ice cream and live to serve.
This story is rather tender and soft. I liked it but it wasn't as hot as the other stories here.
Story codes/tags: Various Bondage, Dog Slave, Handjob, Blowjob, Anal Sex
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #4: First-Time Slave - Sub's POV
A submissive guy first foray into master/slave relationship. He gets a taste of it at the hands of a non-nonsense master. He was put into strict bondage with a touch of sensory deprivation. Robbed of sight and ability to communicate, the sub found himself at total mercy of his master and loving the mingling of fear and excitement.
The emotions and feelings of the first time slave experiencing his first bondage experience was clearly translated. I appreciate that very much. That hooding scene got me so hot and bothered due the the level of anxiety the new slave exuded. It was electrifying to me.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Hooding, Gag, Chains, D/S, Partial Sensory Deprivation, Anal Sex, Orgasm Denial
RATING: 4 stars
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STORY #5: The Piss Mummy - Dom's POV
Story number 5 involved a submissive-piss-worshiping-boy and a master who gets off on bestowing his golden streams on deserving boys.
We would get tight bondage and some manhandling and of course jets and jets of warm you-know-what on you-know-where. Basically, there isn't much happening here just someone drowning in piss and some jacking off. Of course if you have golden shower kink, then it's a different thing altogether.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Watersports, Anal Sex, Handjob, Masturbation
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #6: Five Bucks a Swat - Sub's POV
MC's master loves tight bubble butts for his spanking kink. Slave boy Spanky is fortunate his prized butt received ample attention from his master. One night master decided to flaunt Spanky's delicious tight buns for the benefit of charity.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Spanking, Handjob
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #7: The Executioner’s Boy (Medieval times) - Sub's POV
A farm boy was obsessed with an executioner and kept going into town just to ogle the man even if it means having to watch the executions of unfortunate souls. The boy was drawn to the power held by the executioner. He was also fascinated with fear itself. He is very much like a fearless little moth fluttering closer and closer to the burning hot flame until self-immolation.
When the boy finally caught the eyes of his idol things took a nasty turn and the boy found himself under the full domination of the man he had worshiped all this while. He was steadily broken down by this demanding man who now selfishly calls himself his master.
This is another story I am happy to give 10 shiny stars. You need dark and gritty in your erotica to enhance your sexual excitement? This is it. This is the story for you. It would drown you in pleasure of total domination over a man and also offer sexual ignition of full submission. The epic twisted love in this one makes me tingle all over. Stockholm was out to play....
The man in the black hood became the focus of my existence. He was my captor, my kidnapper, my king, my god, and my family all at once — the one human being I had contact with and therefore the one on which I lavished all my emotions. I hated him, despised him . . . yet loved him, too.
The Executioner’s Boy has a psychological appeal to it. The reconditioning of the farm boy was fascinating to follow yet quite disturbing to watch. The executioner is an extremely harsh master. Consider yourself warned.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Chastity device, Orgasm denial, Piercings, Rapes, Gangbanging, Blowjob, Flogging, Watersports, Anal Sex, Torture
RATING: 10 friggin stars
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STORY #8: Fucking Master’s Lover - Sub's POV
Another orgasm denial master who loves to sexually torture his slave boy by fucking and jerking him off constantly but not letting him come. This slave boy is a bit of a switch. He has a dominant side strong enough to top. With balls bursting full of mancream, there's no chance of him ever saying no to a sexy man proffering himself so wantonly even if it was his master's lover.
This is fucking with the element of danger and guilt. An added thrill to the adulterous, sexually frustrated pair.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Rough Sex, Adultery, Orgasm denial
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #9: Home-Made Lube - Sub's POV
An on loan slave is about to be stuffed turkey. A meaty foot long sausage stuffed turkey. And it isn't even Thanksgiving yet. Thing is one important ingredient for preparation was missing and the master was getting really annoyed. What would happen to this poor slave?
Uhmm that home-made lube is very organic. But doesn't that defeat the purpose of having the latex on?
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Butt rimming, Handjob, Anal Sex
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #10: The Horny Houseguest - Sub's POV
Horny dog boy looking forward to being plowed by an equally horny guest with the blessings of his owner. The owner even graciously offered a selective of toys for his guest to play with his dog boy.
I like how pet boy behaves much like a real domesticated doggy. He was frisky and ready to play. Such a lovable pup. I want one.
Story codes/tags: Dog slave, Blowjob, Toys, Sexy manhandling, Bondage, Anal Sex
RATING: 4 stars
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STORY #11: Isle of Chains (alternate world) - Sub's POV
Conga was on a quest to find and retrieve his best friend Lagan who was missing for half a year already. He felt a mysterious pull from the Isle of Chains a forbidden island where not one returns once they step ashore. Conga was surprised, amazed and shocked by what he found on that island. Will he be able to save his friend and return home safely? Would he want to return now that he had found what he has been missing all these years? Something he didn't know he needed to complete his life with.
The premise of the story was quite interesting and original. The world building was steady and debaucheries of all kinds was found within that mysterious island. Yet I only find this story to be satisfactory but not wow although it does have the most elaborated setup compared with the rest of the stories in this anthology.
Story codes/tags: D/S, Bondage, Flogging, Watersports, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Fisting, Sex Toys, Orgasm denial, Rough Sex, Rape, Collaring
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #12: Fucked by a Stranger - Sub's POV
The MC was a bondage slave and he's very much an exhibitionist. He gets all aroused with others watching him being plowed. While I am aroused watching from the other end.
We get to see slaveboy MC submitting to an anonymous fuck while in full bondage in effort to please his Master. Not much of a submission on his part since he is loving every seconds of it. Hehehe. I liked that the MC puts on a show of defiance for his Master because he knew his Master likes his boy spirited. I have to agree with his Master that a bound, struggling and squirming slave is much more fun to watch than a dead fish. The MC is such a good boy to try to heighten the pleasure of this voyeuristic Master the best of his ability.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Fingering, Ass playing, Paddling
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #13: Two-Slaveboy, Wrap-up - Sub's POV
A story of creative slaveboys mummification. Double the mummy, double the fun. Mummy fucking mummy is hot.
But when you’re mummified you’re like a shrink-wrapped product on a store shelf — you can’t move except to breathe.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Mummification, Anal Sex, Handjob
RATING: 3.5 stars
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STORY #14: Sold to the Highest Bidder - Sub's POV
A very exciting scenario where a slaveboy got himself unceremoniously sold off for pissing off his master by questioning his ownership of him. Looks like he is going to have to learn his lessons the hard way. What went on during the slave processing and auctioning was what gave this story a strong 5 stars! The hot manhandling alone was already the dizzying aspect of this story which I love love to bits!
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Forced Blowjob, Flogging and Whipping (corporal punishments), Anal Sex, Gangbanging, Rapes, Lots of manhandling, Slave Auction
RATING: 5 Satisfied Stars
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STORY #15: Master's New Toy - Sub's POV
A 24/7 slaveboy was excited to watch his master train a new boy and was surprised his Master's generosity towards the end.
Yup, I love this one too. Loving all the hot domination and the total submission by the slave boys was highly arousing.
Picking the kid up, I slung him over my shoulder. I love carrying guys. Something about the weight of their bodies on me, their submission to me and my will . . . it’s totally fucking erotic.
- Hear, hear.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Flogging, Blowjob, Sex Toys, Spit-roasting
RATING: 4 stars
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STORY #16: Scent Slave (a touch of magic) - Dom's POV
The MC of this story found that he had an uncanny sexual power - the more semen he accumulates in his sack, the more appealing he would be to others. It's like having strong pheromones and everyone would want a piece of you.
Ever since the MC saw Bryan a fellow gym mate, he was smitten and driven to own him. Hence he started his full cum sackseduction plan. Would Bryan be able to resist the MC's compelling scent? Or would he start begging to be owned and used?
It was sexy in some part but parts of it made me laughed. :P
Story codes/tags: Self Orgasm Denial, Masturbation, Seduction, D/S
RATING: 3 stars
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STORY #17: Winner Takes All - Sub's POV
Slave Josh found himself stuffed into a man-size duffle bag, bound and gagged, as a prize to a stranger who has won him for the weekend. His weekend Master was a stern and demanding man. Josh struggled to keep up with his temporary master and trying his best not to let his original master down. However it wasn't an easy task to satisfy Master Max who constantly test Josh's resolves with painful and degrading tasks. Slaveboy Josh has one hell of a weekend to survive. Will he be able to keep his good boy record until he returns to his master?
I got all the right sorts of vibes from this story. Large dominating males towering over their subs. There is so much testosterone in this story alone I could almost smell it in the air. It's like breathing in sexy manly pheromones. Yup this was yet another story with lots of erotic manhandling.
I am glad Slaveboy Josh met Master Max. He brought out the best in Josh. He might be highly dominating and rough but he does have a tender side which I liked very much. In short, Slaveboy Josh had experienced the most intense sessions with Master Max over the weekend. It was painful and harrowing but it was also exhilarating, mind-altering and filled Josh with much joy for Josh. Lastly, I agree with other reviewers that...
Master Bill was too blind and idiotic to recognize such a slaveboy gem like Josh who is always ready to serve and submit without a complaint. I was kinda expecting or wishing Master Max would sock him a good one when he dumped Josh like trash in public. Too bad I have to do that in my mind since Master Max didn't react the way I wanted. Ahh... pulverizing Master Bill feels so good.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Handjob, Tortures, Sex Toys, Humiliation-Degradation, Flogging, Gangbanging, Quasirapes, Rough Sex, Watersports, Collaring, Dog Slave, Enema
RATING: 5 Hot Stars
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OVERVIEW
The writing has a pronounced masculinity which I found compelling as it highlights virility and that is sexy to me. I am also delighted to learn that there are so many different terms to refer to the male sexual organ other than just cock or penis. I have also learned that different ways of calling a penis evokes different feelings. Words usage are important and it is powerful when used right. Tube-steak and cum sack makes me go wild with desire. So yea the writing is strong and honed to please.
Winner Takes All is erotica done right. It delivers what it promised; it helps its reader to get off. That is what we are looking for in our erotica right? Not only was it well written, it held true power to ignite our sexual desire hence I call this quality erotica.
This anthology is heavy on TPE, domination and submission, sweet sexual torments like orgasm denial, delicious bondage of various kinds, lots of humiliation and degradation, watersports and some corporal punishments. There are a couple of scenes which might freak out some vanilla readers. Otherwise all else is aim to please readers who enjoys serious BDSM that leans more towards the hardcore side.
I have enjoyed this book immensely and had a tough time suppressing my urge to highlight the whole book. If you are those who enjoys getting into the minds of a real dom or sub, this book is definitely for you as it portrays them perfectly. You would find yourself swept away into the minds of the narrators experiencing their realities where every flicker of their emotions are closely felt by you. This book was written with passion and the desire to bring Master/Slave fantasies to life.
One more thing, please try not to skip the Editor's Note or the Foreword. Both was brilliantly written and you would gain insights on what this anthology is about and what it aims to achieve apart from other tidbits.
Sigh... cover love <3
BOOK DETAILS:
Title: Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce
Author: Christopher Pierce
Publication Date: December 20th, 2011
Publisher: Perfectbound Press
Type: Anthologies (Short Stories), 95,836 words (approximate)
Genre: Gay BDSM Erotica
Description:
The prolific author Christopher Pierce (christopherpierceerotica.com) has appeared in practically every gay magazine and more than three dozen story anthologies. WINNER TAKES ALL, his newest collection, offers the title novella and 16 shorter stories about gay Master/slave relationships, ranging from the edgiest to the most romantic with every variation in between. While only a few stories are set in other times or other worlds than our own, they are all sex fantasies, not slices of life. Their aim is to entertain, which they do splendidly. Advance readers of WINNER TAKES ALL have said that "Masters and slaves pop off the pages like heroic figures from the leather underworld" (Jay Starre) in "lip-smackingly kinky tales" (Jeff Mann) featuring "beautiful language, touching characterization, poignant plotting, and a full-bodied eroticism" (M. Christian, in his Foreword). The stunning original cover images are by Thom Magister, himself a Perfectbound Press author (THE SLAVE JOURNALS AND OTHER TALES OF THE OLD GUARD).
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Worthy by Lia Black
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
3 Stars for the effort and for being a good diversion to pass the time.
A sweet and caloric slavefic fairytale. Enjoyable at first bite, unfortunately it only makes you hunger for something more sustainable than a sugar fix. (See this? I could write short reviews too)
Dare I stop my review here? I could, couldn't I? I maybe should too. Because what comes after this is a product of my over analyzing.
Nudge me if you wish for my trademark long-ass review.
*Edits 10/12/13 @ 11.03pm:
I have just answered some fun and interesting questionnaires on this book over at the Goodreads BDSM Group . I thought maybe I should share it here as well:
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1. Do you have a favorite character? Why?
Maybe Demetrie. His way of enjoying Sev's body excites me. Just like Sev, I am taken with Demetrie's commanding air and finding him hard to resist. That's something rare for me as I usually see myself from the perspective of the dom rather than the sub.
I wished I could like the protagonist better but to me, Sev is not a well developed character. For someone who has known joy of family even only an adoptive one and used to having his own freedom, Sev does seem to give up on his identity and self worth quite easily. Many times he feels much like a puppet without free will and lacks sense of self preservation. This was observed even at the early stage of Demetrie's ownership of him. He does not even question internally on Demetrie's demanding request of him. He is too naive and trusting to be a street smart boy with a nomadic tribe upbringing. This doll like quality of his is rather disturbing.
2. Does a particular scene stick in your mind? Or a quote? What resonated with you?
I like Demetrie's blindfold punishment for Sev. Very interesting way of training trust. Just like one would apply to an animal like a horse. I just read one femdom story on human pony training that applies such technique too. Fascinating. >:D
3. Homogeneity is important to Athena. What was your reaction?
A place that lacks originality and individuality. No wonder Demetrie is so bored of his life there. In real life homogeneity is also known as racism ;)
In the olden days, aristocrats tends to put very high standards on pure blood marriages. This might also still be true till this age and time.
4. This is a highly stratified society with roles strictly delineated. Do you think our society is similar? Maybe we don't acknowledge it, but it exists?
Yes it does exist in our real world. Look around you. The poor is still dirt poor and the rich is still filthy rich. Who will have the more power? Money makes the political world goes round. What would that means to the lower income class? We feel such oppression daily.
Athena seems to be a place that discourages change in order to maintain firm control over its citizen and resources. Those who refused to conform would be ousted like Demetrie as a safeguard to its system.
This unfortunately leads me to question the plotline whereby Demetrie gave his title and name to Sev when he decided to leave Athena as an outcast. I mean how could this possibly be done when Demetrie himself is to be stripped off his title even to the extend that his assets will be seized just because he wouldn't fulfill his obligation as an aristocrat? There is simply no reason whatsoever for Athena or its aristocratic members to honor Demetrie's transfer of his title and name to Sev a mere dreg with zero rights or even simple recognition as a human being? To me, this plotline is OTT and does not conform with the oppressive and autocratic universe created by the author.
5. What did you think of Demetrie's plan?
Childish and fanciful, borderline idiotic. It shouldn't even be successful or plausible if the plots were tight enough and if the characters are well built. Yes I am saying it IS unrealistic. It is contradictory to the strict caste system of Athena. Think politically... would Demetrie's rebellious, traitorous way of escaping the system be ignored by his autocratic government? Wouldn't it be wiser for them to curb it at its stem before it becomes a precedent?
This quote sums up Athena for us:
Michael nodded. “I heard that Athena cleared out another section of her ghetto last night. What are they calling it these days? Oh yes, ‘progressive beautification’.” He shook his head slowly. Soon there would be no ghettos; the dregs would be buried under swimming pools, shopping centers, and aristolitical complexes. The sign of a thriving society was its lack of a lower caste, and since raising dregs up economically, socially, and politically would create a strain on the wealthy, it made far more sense to eliminate the problem more permanently by eliminating those who suffered it.
6. Do you think the author's story answered the member's photo and prompt?
Firstly, I am excited a photo of the bookcover from one of my favorite M/M Psychological Thriller graphic novel was used In These Words by Kichiku Neko & TogaQ. TogaQ's art is to die-for. And Kichiku Neko writes awesome psychological thrillers of the erotic kind.
Okay back to the prompt. I think it was answered quite well. The author even incorporated the limberness of the slave in the picture into the story and the cards strewed across the floor was also applied to the story. I dig the sex scenes too. It was sensual and erotic.
7. Do you wish something different was done or incorporated into the story?
Not really. The author tried her best to deliver according to the prompt and she has succeeded in that goal alone. I hope that by reading the honest reviews of her readers, she would be able to improve her writings further, especially in terms of character development and making tighter plotlines. I could see that she has lots of potential to excel. All she needs was more experience and constructive feedbacks.
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BOOK DETAILS:
Title: Worthy
Related: Love Has No Boundaries, Don't Read in the Closet Events
Author: Lia Black
Publication Date: June 15th, 2013
Type: Short Story, 47,228 words
Genre: Dystopian, Alternate Universe, M/M, Gay, Romance, Erotica, Consensual, Light BDSM
Tags/Keywords: Master/Slave, One-time Threeseome, Cross-dressing, Bondage, Dominance-Submission, BDSM, Acrobat, Contortionist, Circus Performer, Gypsy, Slave, Pleasure/Sexual Slave, Willing-slave, Chastity device/belt, Orgasm-denial, Whipping/Flogging, corporal Punishment, Rough Sex, Maledom, Interracial, Master/Pet, Menage, Threesomes, Romance, Young Man, Adored Pet/Slave, Age gap, Alpha Dominant Male, Alternate Universe, Anal Sex, Oral Sex, Hand-job,Androgyny, Bareback, Collaring & Leash, Cute Adorable Character, Effeminate Male Character, Erotica, HEA, Loving adoring partner, Piercing, Possessive Master, Twink, Restricted Freedom, Rich Wealthy MC, Rimming, Sensual, Slave Market, Slave Training, Submissive protagonist, Voyeurism, Fluffy
Description:
Dear Author,
This is a dystopian class-based society where being a slave boy is a prized position. For those not born into the wealthy class, there are few options for work. A position as a slave boy means security and safety from a life of poverty and the danger of the streets.
Dystopian - set in a world similar to ours but with a few tweaks. Usually a bit darker or a more frightening version of what our society could become.
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An agile young slave is bent backward over the knees of his doting master; his bindings are loose and their arrangement is “in the cards”.
This story was written as a part of the M/M Romance Group's "Love Has No Boundaries" event. Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice. Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.
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This is a FREEBIE in conjunction with the Goodreads M/M Romance group's Love Has No Boundaries event for year 2013.
* Reviewed on December 10th, 2013
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