Figuring It Out - Shawn Lane
2.5 stars
This read much more like the outline of a good story than an actual story. It spans several years of time and glosses over months and years passing with jarring transitions like "it was several months before i saw him again."
I'd anticipated a fun, light-hearted gfy/ofy between the jock and the drama-geek. I got instead emotionless telling of things that happened to Avery rather than getting to see those things happen to him.
It's difficult to do justice to such a long-term development of a relationship in 30 pages.
If it were more fleshed-out and detailed, the story would actually be a great one. But as it is, it's just okay.