Undeniable (The Dalton Gang Series, #1) ...
Holy Hot Cowboy Batman!Ok so the blurb for this sounded good. What it doesn't tell you is how freaking
hot and sexy this book is! I mean wow! While we have an actual plot goin on, there's so much sexin here I got distracted a little.... *sigh* I decided to find a pic to convey the hotness that is Dax Campbell
Anywho..... What I liked: The writing was great and the characters and plot were really well developed! There was a more emotional side to this than I expected there to be and I really felt what they felt. I cheered at the happy times and booed at the bad. I wanted them to be together and I literally felt my ♥ constrict when I thought he was leaving.
Dax Campbell always wanted to be a cowboy. Unfortunately that wasn't what his father, the wealthy town lawyer, wanted. So at the tender age of 18 he leaves town and doesn't look back. Sixteen years later he returns home to claim the ranch he inherited, along with his two best friends, after the death of what should have been his parents. Arwen Poole (what a name for a chic!) has harbored a major crush on Dax since high school and has a plan to sex him out of her system for good.
More of what I liked: The side story of Darcy and Josh. Darcy is Dax's sister who tried to make up for his leaving with her parents. She went to law school, puts in all the long hours, gives up her free time to basically cater to her dad all in the hopes to make partner in the family firm. Sorry kid but your dad is a Grade A ASS and it ain't gonna happen! It takes her a few years but she finally gets it. Josh is there for her when she needs him most, and they come to realize there is more than friendship there. The sweetest side story ever! I almost couldn't decide who I liked better b/w Josh and Dax. Dax is more of an A hole and Josh is the sweet silent type.
"He was just as intense, just as passionate, but he was the definition of still waters."And even though he is definitely a silent alpha male, he is so sweet.
“Do you know how long I’ve waited for you?”... “I want you for the rest of my days. I want to go to sleep wrapped around you. I want to wake up the same. I want to talk about what’s for supper over breakfast, and talk about our days curled up on the couch. I love you, Darcy Campbell. I want you to be my wife. But right now what I want is to get you out of your clothes.” SWOON! But this story isn't about him its about Dax. He is
not the strong silent type. He is the epitome of in your face, take no shit, leave when and if I wanna leave alpha man. But underneath all his hardness is a soft heart. He didn't expect to fall in love and didn't know what to do with those feelings. But the thing I liked was that he never denied it. He owned it.
"Dax had admitted to her [Darcy]
that he loved Arwen, but he’d never in his life loved anyone, and he didn’t know what to do with that love."Arwen has her own issues stemming from a broken (ish) childhood. She doesn't do relationships. All she wants is the yummy goodness Dax can giver in bed. And in the bath. And truck. And kitchen table. I think you see where this is going... And even though there is
a lot of sex in this book, it doesn't really detract from the story. We see them start as just a sex fling; then start to go on dates, then the feelings creep in. There's no love at first sight or after a week type of thing. It grows as the story grows.
“Do you love me?” The grin that broke over his face was all teeth and dimples and happy happy joy. “Yeah. Oh yeah. Hell yeah. Shit yeah.” There's a bunch of supporting characters that were a great addition to the book. I believe there is going to be at least two more in the series; Dax's two buddies Casper and Boone will have books as well. I really enjoyed this. Its my first from this author and I like her style. I will definitely be checking out her other works!