This had a lot of potential, though very little by ways of living up to it.
The writing is simply what it is. It is not beautiful, it does not turn a good phrase, but it is also not painful to read. There were a few points when I cringed at the dialogue, but that's not much out of the normal, to be honest. And it's set in the 40's, so there's a few phrases or ways of saying things that haven't been uttered in approximately 70 years.
As for the story itself, I expected it to be more about the keeping of the Cinderella Dress and have a little more action to it than it did. It is a pretty dull book, and what little action we do get is generally nonsensical with plot holes or unanswered questions. Such as, Elsie acts like Keeper of the Wardrobe for the Cinderella Dress has been an age-old tradition, taking place for generations, but at the end of the book, when we meet Fyodora, one of Cinderella's descendants; she had worn the dress at her wedding! The timeline is never clearly laid out and so it leaves you questioning exactly when Cinderella's family stopped taking care of the dress. Not only that, but the story is mostly more about Kate and her life at the department store than it really is about the Cinderella dress or even Kate learning to guard it, let alone keeping it from the step-sisters' descendants, as the synopsis would indicate. And the end is ridiculously anti-climatic, which was a huge let-down, as I was banking a lot of hopes on that the end would be better than the rest of the book. There is a sequel, about Cinderella's shoes, but I won't be sticking around to see if it is any better or answers some of my questions.
And as for our main character...Kate is, simply put, not the sharpest crayon in the crayon box. She puts the ACTUAL Cinderella dress, both the wedding gown and her rag dress, on display at the department store, even after she knows what they are and that Cinderella's step-sisters' descendants are after them. Which is just abysmally stupid. She also intentionally scares Elsie, who has Alzheimer's, so that she could garner more information about the Cinderella dress. That's downright cruel.
Few nitpicks in editing:
Kate uses the term "Cinderella dress" before she even knows that Kopciuszelz is Cinderella! Elsie reveals this fact a few pages later. Page 53, I believe.
At some point in the book, Kate receives a telegram. Didn't telegrams have "STOP" at the end of lines?? Cause this one didn't, which seems slightly inaccurate.