CRENSHAW by Katherine Applegate
CRENSHAW by Katherine Applegate
An amusing, light and easy read. But, while it is pretty enjoyable, I would've liked there to be a sequel or a second chapter, although that isn't necessary, just something I would personally like, since the author ends the fic with a glimpse of what is to come for Jared and Jensen now that they have been mated.
“We’re doing this, so I figured we should at least know each other’s names. I’m Jensen. And you’re a fucking moron.”
“I’ve been called worse,” Jared said, a smug smirk covering his face. “But the name is Jared.”
“Or fucking moron.”
This story just completely sucked me in, to the point that I am really glad I didn't have much else to do today so I could just spend time reading it, as is necessary because it's - ugh, good. There are moments in this that are really very sad, but how can you have a ST fic involving Tarsus IV and Jim's resulting trauma and not have there be any sad? It's also quite beautiful. And it convinced me I really do need a shelf for bonding stories.
Spock felt almost bad that he could not explain Jim better, but he was aware that every time he attempted to explain he ended up making Jim sound bad. He had tried it in Standard, in English, and in Vulcan, but he could not find the correct words. Could not find the word they could accept—he had a feeling that his mother would be very displeased if he told her Jim was t'hy'la.
I absolutely loved it and can't wait to read more by the author.
Spock had lived all of Jim's trauma second-hand. He had found solace in the eye of the hurricane, taking advantage of the way Jim could keep everything at bay. I know you, he thought. I do not want to know who I am without you.
The writing isn't perfect and there are some typos but it's still great.
Edit: initally didn't add this quote cuz I typed this up just before bed and clearly I shouldn't do that since I come back and remember stuff I've forgotten, but - quote:
Sybok doesn't believe in the concept of t'hy'la, has never experienced it.
Not many do, but Sarek knows how to recognize it, and thinks that Spock is not the one they should be so very concerned about.
He can see the way Jim has angled his body towards Spock, the way he keeps contact, and the way he defers to Spock every time a doctor speaks. More often than not, it is Spock who replies, who knows allergies and medical histories while Jim lays back, tired and resigned and like the child he is. It is abruptly, starkly obvious that Jim Kirk has no one else in the world but Spock.
Started reading this sometime last month around Xmas time before my kindle errored out and cut off the story. So this had an intriguing enough premise to come back to and I'm both glad I did and also a little underwhelmed in parts.
And that's about as much as I feel like writing for this story, here's a quote:
“For the last time, I’m not polishing his broomstick.”
“Though it sounded as if you might like to.”
Note: noticeable editing errors
Eight paragraphs in and it already made me laugh, so kudos for that.
“It’s like your hotness factor got cranked to eleven.”
There was another long silence before Sam replied, carefully enunciating each syllable, “My hotness factor?”